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Marvyn
5/13/17, 12:12 PM
Sorry you didn't like the story, Viridian. Not sure what you mean by race stereotypes - I actually like badass niggas, being one myself. If people like this exist [and they do] they are not stereotypes, really. I also made this guy highly intelligent, but that also seemed to trouble you. My bad, I guess.
5/13/17, 11:46 AM
What jarred me most was the "do my homework"-thing transported from grade school into university. The robber's narrative voice seems way too bright for the life he was leading, unless he just got a brain upgrade. What's with the race stereotypes? You can do race change without wading neck-deep in "badass niggas".
5/13/17, 11:01 AM
This was very well written. The racist stereotype nature of the changes makes me uneasy liking this, but I justify it by thinking the reality changer was a really nasty piece of work.
5/13/17, 10:46 AM
As other have said, hot. I liked it a lot and this was definitely not too subtle. Good progression, too.
May 12, 2017
5/13/17, 10:42 AM
This was fun. More of the Captain, please.
5/13/17, 10:38 AM
Excellent writing, as usual. I liked the way you got into Hank's thoughts, and the seeming camaraderie at the house. I felt like the revelations at the end were about to fall into the commonplace, but then you mostly skirted that with sheer hotness and being enthusiastically detailed . Good work :-)
NoToTrump
5/13/17, 8:51 AM
Moar?
AeonFlux
5/13/17, 8:33 AM
You can't just stop in the middle...........how's going further ???????? What happens next ????
Anonymous
5/13/17, 8:07 AM
oh no ... so does that mean we will wait for the next chapter of the Re-Educator longer than expected >_< ??? I really miss the ginger family ...
Marvyn
5/13/17, 7:28 AM
Well here's my next attempt. Readers of 'Dominoes' will notice a few similarities, but this story is very different. I hope you enjoy it. Once again, I'm British, so while the story is set in the US, the spelling is UK English. Hope that does not jar too much with any American readers. Marvyn x