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Marvyn
5/13/17, 7:28 AM
Well here's my next attempt. Readers of 'Dominoes' will notice a few similarities, but this story is very different. I hope you enjoy it. Once again, I'm British, so while the story is set in the US, the spelling is UK English. Hope that does not jar too much with any American readers. Marvyn x
Marvyn
5/13/17, 5:35 AM
Thanks to all for the positive comments, particularly Boone - very inspiring to me that you're enjoying it so much. I've just submitted the final chapter, but it's about double the length of previous ones, so you were right. The ending also hints at a possible explanation of why Jevon has gone through this.
Marvyn
5/13/17, 5:29 AM
Well folks, this is the final chapter. I hope you enjoyed reading it. Thank you for the positive feed-back so far. Although Jevon's life is very different from how it was to start with, I think he's quite enjoying his new existence. Finally, a humble request to the editor: Could you possibly fix the 'next chapter' links now that the episodes are all in one file? I notice some of them don't work, which makes it hard for people to work through the story. Thanks!
Anonymous
5/13/17, 5:26 AM
Great as always! I've enjoyed a lot with this one! I see that Kurt have gained some fans! but there's still many intersting possibilities with Scott, he needs more public humiliation, especially in front of his friends and the rest of the school. Maybe he would be submisive with other guys that he used to consider loosers ( he would be even bullied by geeks or the members of the school band, fully concious that now he get's turned on by suffer humilliations), but the sexual services are always for his master, of course!
Boone.
5/13/17, 5:09 AM
I love this story, it's deliciously good. I like how now Jevon defines himself as a loser, and gets horny for thinking on him as a "dumb nigga". Would be more instalments? I think there's room for at least two more chapters.
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:59 AM
That was amazing. Would love a spinoff involving a lawyer!
B
5/13/17, 4:45 AM
**Just doing IT very quick and casual and NO "going...
B
5/13/17, 4:44 AM
Omg Edlam! You are the greatest !! Please keep writing stories ! I always love how you make these straight men/daddies do gay stuff and make them think it's normal. Just doing very quick and casual and now "going down the stairs" or "going deeply into the spiral" bullshit. I think it's way hotter that way. Going straight to the point - controlling the straights lol. Xoxo
Anonymous
5/13/17, 4:31 AM
Definitely turn Kurt into a jock boy slave. Would love to see a hairy chested alpha turned into a cock sucking wimp.
May 12, 2017
Anonymous
5/13/17, 3:42 AM
Great story! Loved it!!