Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/12/17, 6:09 AM
I'm a little bummed by Bubble butt boy not cumming. I like my bottoms to squirt when being fucked. Never cumming again? That's cruel!
Anonymous
5/12/17, 5:31 AM
please keep going
Hyphap
5/12/17, 4:05 AM
Oh I like where this is going. More please!
5/12/17, 3:02 AM
What an imagination and what a story! - Bravo!
Anonymous
5/12/17, 1:07 AM
Oh, man! the last part was sweeter than I expected! I like the fact that Jevon s totally aware of the changes, and I like the new additions, I really like that he's becoming an almost cartoonish stereotype. Do you plan to give him some graffiti touches or a certain hiphop style? I'm dying to know what is his new work! B ut this chapter left me some questions: is all the people around Jevon changing? it sounds like Dante was drastically altered, and that he used to be more refined and sucessful. Are you planning a spin-off, or a small story about Dante? that would be great to read!
tomozco
5/11/17, 10:23 PM
This is insanely awesome, Edlam! Had me on the edge all the way through, literally ;) Why don't you just become a full time writer... LOL! Love the clueless corruption of the minds, the helpless realization of their fate and the endless incestuous trap they are stuck in! The magic/eternal life bit was not totally my thing, as it takes away a bit from the reality of the scenario, but I'm not bothered by it relative to the overall storyline. It'd be cool for Jerry to organize a gathering or a 'mass' with a bunch of his followers....after all, they can only feel the pleasure amongst fellow members, so why not share and spread the love?! :) Keep up all the good work!!!
Anonymous
5/11/17, 6:08 PM
This should totally crossover into your main story you're doing right now. Like a Marvel Comics event
Anonymous
5/11/17, 5:04 PM
Great Story Love the transformation. Change him with more Piercings and bleach bis dreads....
Anonymous
5/11/17, 4:18 PM
You gotta start changing his clothes, man. Tight wifebeaters -- SO hot
Willie Cici
5/11/17, 3:30 PM
I didn't see a sequel in this story, but your comments have fueled inspiration. Let me see what happens.