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Anonymous
5/11/17, 10:47 AM
Ditto. I'd love to see a sequel to this.
Anonymous
5/11/17, 10:32 AM
This was so fucking hot! This might not be a sequel type story, but would love to hear more from this world. Maybe other similar demons
Kyle
5/11/17, 10:11 AM
And William showed up, I see. Cliff wasn't having any of it, though. Still intriguing. Particularly William's reaction.
Kyle
5/11/17, 10:09 AM
I am so very happy you added more chapters this year to bring this series to the forefront on the new site. I did not get to read Cliff's thread originally so am delighted to have it as well as Justin to read. I found this chapter difficult to ground in at first, not quite realising who Justin was or that the shared perception was taking place. Probably just a bit slow. Once that clicked in it was easy to follow along. As with the other comments, it is refreshing and beautiful to see your writing here and the healing Cliff experienced. I disagree with another comment in that I feel that you paced this tale extremely well and Cliff's new self felt natural and perfect. I shared the click moment when he saw the new interpretation and it all fell into place. Thanks again. I am apprehensive to start the last story set because I don't want it to end.
Kyle
5/11/17, 9:48 AM
Yay, they are helping. Great imagery and powerful messages. There is a lot of thought and depth to your writing. I loved Cliff's revelation and the shift to everything that one change in perspective as why his father had been crying made. A single point of view character is a change for your stories too. It held us in the darkness, uncomfortable. But it makes the light all the more bright and beautiful. I love the hope this revelation gives Cliff. "When you don't really approve of yourself, it's kinda hard to expect anyone else will." - A deep message. Great writing! I loved your original two sets and was delighted to see you had written more. Thank you.
Kyle
5/11/17, 9:24 AM
I really hope they can help him.
Anonymous
5/11/17, 9:16 AM
just so you know, there are churches that are completely okay with being gay. some churches (Episcopalian, Unitarian, etc) even have openly gay priests and bishops
Kyle
5/11/17, 9:14 AM
Intriguing.
TheWanderer
5/11/17, 7:59 AM
So TJ's version of a repulsive male is a bigger distorted version of his father...? Which is also like bigger version of himself? XDDD
Anonymous
5/11/17, 7:46 AM
This one was awesome! As it is usually with your stories. Don't let this bei a one shot. Jerry had countless other families before and I would love to hear from them. At one point it would be amazing if Jerry could bring some of these families together for a mass, so to speak