Recent Comments

Kyle
5/11/17, 9:48 AM
Yay, they are helping. Great imagery and powerful messages. There is a lot of thought and depth to your writing. I loved Cliff's revelation and the shift to everything that one change in perspective as why his father had been crying made. A single point of view character is a change for your stories too. It held us in the darkness, uncomfortable. But it makes the light all the more bright and beautiful. I love the hope this revelation gives Cliff. "When you don't really approve of yourself, it's kinda hard to expect anyone else will." - A deep message. Great writing! I loved your original two sets and was delighted to see you had written more. Thank you.
Kyle
5/11/17, 9:24 AM
I really hope they can help him.
Anonymous
5/11/17, 9:16 AM
just so you know, there are churches that are completely okay with being gay. some churches (Episcopalian, Unitarian, etc) even have openly gay priests and bishops
Kyle
5/11/17, 9:14 AM
Intriguing.
TheWanderer
5/11/17, 7:59 AM
So TJ's version of a repulsive male is a bigger distorted version of his father...? Which is also like bigger version of himself? XDDD
Anonymous
5/11/17, 7:46 AM
This one was awesome! As it is usually with your stories. Don't let this bei a one shot. Jerry had countless other families before and I would love to hear from them. At one point it would be amazing if Jerry could bring some of these families together for a mass, so to speak
fan
5/11/17, 6:36 AM
so goooood! I hope you keep writing because I love your stories!
Anonymous
5/11/17, 5:58 AM
The story was a nice beginning, but as a minor detail it always bugs me to see the word "serum" misused. It's not just "stuff that is injected", it specifically means plasma extracted from blood with clotting proteins removed. Makes one wonder what the source was when the stuff glowed blue. On second thought, perhaps there's a story in that too? :-)
Anonymous
5/11/17, 5:05 AM
Great story, I hope we find out the serum's contagiously spread through bodily fluids in the next chapter...
Boone
5/11/17, 4:36 AM
WOW! I mean, WOW! You're really good on this, Edlam! Honestly, I don't like the stories that involves some kind of incest, but I like your stories. I don't know why, but for some reason I find very exciting when a character is renamed with a condescending, parodic,or plainly ridiculous name. I don't know, maybe it's because it means that the dominant character gets total control over the victim and his life. Would be interesting to read another chapter of this story, with different characters and situations.