Recent Comments

Marvyn
5/11/17, 4:27 AM
Thanks to all for the very positive feedback which is very motivating to me to and helps me carry on with the story. The first part is there now - hope you like it. In answer to Boone, I've been writing bits and pieces for several years, but only as a hobby. I've never published anything before. I'm a bit of a perfectionist and I like to go over what I write several times, editing until it's as perfect as it can be. I've just fixed a continuity error in part 3 that I only noticed when it was up here. Please let me know if I get any American stuff wrong - I've visited that fine country, but I'm from the UK.
Anonymous
5/11/17, 3:17 AM
Finally, someone working his craft and telling a hot, sexy story. Great job!! Keep it up!!
Anonymous
5/11/17, 3:04 AM
I really hope the tables don't get turned here. That kills a story for me
Anonymous
5/11/17, 2:30 AM
My dick is hard!
Boone
5/11/17, 1:19 AM
So hot indeed! When we'll see the next part? this is going wonderfully! I wonder how trashy and ghetto Jevon will become? You're gonna mess his handsome features?
Boone
5/11/17, 1:05 AM
Hello, and welcome to this site! Your story is one of the best here! I'm curious, how long you've been writing? This is damn good, and very well written! The transformation is simply fantastic, I really like how trashy Jevon is becoming,. I had been looking for something like this, but I'd never found a story as good as this. I wonder what's ging to happen next!
Anonymous
5/11/17, 12:51 AM
This is so hot! Can't wait to see what happens!
Jack
5/10/17, 8:47 PM
great story telling = keep it up and keep them coming
Sieg
5/10/17, 8:37 PM
I can't seem to open the first one :((
AeonFlux
5/10/17, 7:07 PM
Keep on writing......waiting for the next chapter