Recent Comments

Boone
5/11/17, 1:19 AM
So hot indeed! When we'll see the next part? this is going wonderfully! I wonder how trashy and ghetto Jevon will become? You're gonna mess his handsome features?
Boone
5/11/17, 1:05 AM
Hello, and welcome to this site! Your story is one of the best here! I'm curious, how long you've been writing? This is damn good, and very well written! The transformation is simply fantastic, I really like how trashy Jevon is becoming,. I had been looking for something like this, but I'd never found a story as good as this. I wonder what's ging to happen next!
Anonymous
5/11/17, 12:51 AM
This is so hot! Can't wait to see what happens!
Jack
5/10/17, 8:47 PM
great story telling = keep it up and keep them coming
Sieg
5/10/17, 8:37 PM
I can't seem to open the first one :((
AeonFlux
5/10/17, 7:07 PM
Keep on writing......waiting for the next chapter
Marvyn
5/10/17, 6:58 PM
This is my first story on here - I hope you all enjoy it. I wanted to write something involving gradual changes over a period of time, so sexual activity will be a while in coming to make it more believable. Although the setting is America, I am British, so while I have tried to use American expressions and phraseology, the spelling is UK English. Apologies in advance to any American people finding anything wrong - I've done my best!
5/10/17, 6:35 PM
I liked it. I hope they become a couple. It seems to flow pretty well to me.
5/10/17, 4:14 PM
Hi! Thanks for the feedback. Which sections didn't you think flowed very well?
Anonymous
5/10/17, 2:43 PM
Good start! Spend some time editing. There were sections that didn't flow.