Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/11/17, 12:51 AM
This is so hot! Can't wait to see what happens!
Jack
5/10/17, 8:47 PM
great story telling = keep it up and keep them coming
Sieg
5/10/17, 8:37 PM
I can't seem to open the first one :((
AeonFlux
5/10/17, 7:07 PM
Keep on writing......waiting for the next chapter
Marvyn
5/10/17, 6:58 PM
This is my first story on here - I hope you all enjoy it. I wanted to write something involving gradual changes over a period of time, so sexual activity will be a while in coming to make it more believable. Although the setting is America, I am British, so while I have tried to use American expressions and phraseology, the spelling is UK English. Apologies in advance to any American people finding anything wrong - I've done my best!
5/10/17, 6:35 PM
I liked it. I hope they become a couple. It seems to flow pretty well to me.
5/10/17, 4:14 PM
Hi! Thanks for the feedback. Which sections didn't you think flowed very well?
Anonymous
5/10/17, 2:43 PM
Good start! Spend some time editing. There were sections that didn't flow.
Anonymous
5/10/17, 1:48 PM
i want a part 4 so bad
Anonymous
5/10/17, 11:28 AM
Great story! I hope to see more of it soon~