Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/9/17, 10:50 AM
Very promising!
TheWanderer
5/9/17, 5:18 AM
Just to clarify, I'm not criticizing the story, it was just my thought after reading the story. Hope that it didn't upset you. :-p
JasCo
5/9/17, 4:07 AM
They are kind of standalone with a similar theme.
Anonymous
5/9/17, 3:38 AM
More please!!!
biguycnj
5/9/17, 2:18 AM
I really hope this was not the ending The though of a team meeting ,goo, and cocoons has me wanting more
Anonymous
5/9/17, 1:42 AM
Man this story was awesome! Good work, hope to see a sequal
5/9/17, 1:17 AM
This is so wild. I just wished the goo had affected Riley with as much mind control as the coach.You've got a wonderfully sexy imagination!
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 9:27 PM
Hot
5/8/17, 3:05 PM
Love this chapter! Can't wait to see where this will go. Good Job!
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 2:55 PM
This story has lots of potential but ends up being bit hurried. The first significant changes are skipped with only a mention, which (to me) detracted from the experience. Still, please keep writing.