Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/9/17, 3:19 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Robert M
5/9/17, 1:12 PM
:) Hi TheWanderer... Nope not upset... I like it when people post comments... someone noticed that did an accidental character flip and told me and I fixed it. I am not a professional writer and I am definitely not a professional editor so any and all input is appreciated.
Anonymous
5/9/17, 12:37 PM
A month... where's the next?
Anonymous
5/9/17, 10:50 AM
Very promising!
TheWanderer
5/9/17, 5:18 AM
Just to clarify, I'm not criticizing the story, it was just my thought after reading the story. Hope that it didn't upset you. :-p
JasCo
5/9/17, 4:07 AM
They are kind of standalone with a similar theme.
Anonymous
5/9/17, 3:38 AM
More please!!!
biguycnj
5/9/17, 2:18 AM
I really hope this was not the ending The though of a team meeting ,goo, and cocoons has me wanting more
Anonymous
5/9/17, 1:42 AM
Man this story was awesome! Good work, hope to see a sequal
5/9/17, 1:17 AM
This is so wild. I just wished the goo had affected Riley with as much mind control as the coach.You've got a wonderfully sexy imagination!