Recent Comments

biguycnj
5/9/17, 2:18 AM
I really hope this was not the ending The though of a team meeting ,goo, and cocoons has me wanting more
Anonymous
5/9/17, 1:42 AM
Man this story was awesome! Good work, hope to see a sequal
5/9/17, 1:17 AM
This is so wild. I just wished the goo had affected Riley with as much mind control as the coach.You've got a wonderfully sexy imagination!
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 9:27 PM
Hot
5/8/17, 3:05 PM
Love this chapter! Can't wait to see where this will go. Good Job!
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 2:55 PM
This story has lots of potential but ends up being bit hurried. The first significant changes are skipped with only a mention, which (to me) detracted from the experience. Still, please keep writing.
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 2:13 PM
Wish to see Sam's friend eventually find him working at this bar and the jock will transform his friend to another jock (bro).
Robert M
5/8/17, 12:43 PM
No, no actual forgetting, only almost forgetting... thanks for the comments.
TheWanderer
5/8/17, 10:07 AM
Oh wait...it says "almost forgetting"...just hoping he didn't actually forget it...
TheWanderer
5/8/17, 10:06 AM
Seriously? You had one job, find out if he's turning against you (well you did but...) YOU FORGOT IT!!!??? By you I mean the character, author you did a great job...besides letting your main char forgetting the most important thing :-p