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5/8/17, 3:05 PM
Love this chapter! Can't wait to see where this will go. Good Job!
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 2:55 PM
This story has lots of potential but ends up being bit hurried. The first significant changes are skipped with only a mention, which (to me) detracted from the experience. Still, please keep writing.
May 7, 2017
Anonymous
5/8/17, 2:13 PM
Wish to see Sam's friend eventually find him working at this bar and the jock will transform his friend to another jock (bro).
Robert M
5/8/17, 12:43 PM
No, no actual forgetting, only almost forgetting... thanks for the comments.
TheWanderer
5/8/17, 10:07 AM
Oh wait...it says "almost forgetting"...just hoping he didn't actually forget it...
TheWanderer
5/8/17, 10:06 AM
Seriously? You had one job, find out if he's turning against you (well you did but...) YOU FORGOT IT!!!??? By you I mean the character, author you did a great job...besides letting your main char forgetting the most important thing :-p
rayn
5/8/17, 8:24 AM
You're definitely one of my favs to follow now! Please keep the good work up!
rayn
5/8/17, 8:24 AM
Yay! Another chapter! Hot, and with a plot twist too! I like it! Also, slight correction - it's to 'pique' one's curiosity, not 'peek'.
Anonymous
5/8/17, 7:38 AM
Well, Edlam have uploaded the last chapters with a range of 4 to 6 months, so it's safe to assume that the next chapter will come close to Halloween, around October, or maybe even in mid November. So, I'm afraid to say that we all will have to get a big supply of popcorns!
Anonymous
5/8/17, 5:48 AM
Are these standalone stories? I'm not seeing the connection between the first and second chapter here?