Recent Comments

K. Malone
5/3/17, 8:08 PM
A really interesting use of mermaids and sirens and a good overall set up and story. I don't have much more to add beyond another nod to the originality of your work and the various ways your ideas play out. Good job!
K. Malone
5/3/17, 8:07 PM
A well done sexual farce is hard to pull off (comedy in general is difficult) and while I didn't enjoy all of the humor I appreciated the effort put into the work and the details. The exploration of the other world's culture and society was really nicely played and the transmutations and mind warping was really well written. Funny, silly, and erotic at the right moments I was really amused. Great job continuing the series and I hope there will be more to it at some point. I realize this isn't your style so I doubt it will be written but I do wonder if orcs, tanukis, minotaurs, and centaurs also exist in this continuum. Overall great job!
K.Malone
5/3/17, 8:01 PM
I remember reading this story on the EMCSA and loving it then. Excellent use of the way the narrator's perceptions changed with events and how the story shifted over time. The subtle moments where Jay and Ice realized something was off but then forgot about it. I'd have enjoyed a bit more detail with the satyr tf but really overall I am happy to see this reposted here and new chapters in the series. That said the Satyrs clearly have a much harder time changing the humans and absorbing this universe then the pixies, goos, and even elves it seems. Such a pitty. Still the new reworked setting and backstory in the new chapters is excellent.
Anonymous
5/3/17, 7:42 PM
Very hot... Love ur stories
Anonymous
5/3/17, 7:41 PM
Great story... Great series
Anonymous
5/3/17, 6:46 PM
There will be a sequel? this is damn good!
Lenny
5/3/17, 6:13 PM
I wanted to be Danny. Hope the pledge returns for more modifications of the frat.
Anonymous
5/3/17, 5:18 PM
Hot! Hot! HOT
Fiddlerbear
5/3/17, 3:57 PM
Ive actually been thinking about how this encounter could have altered their anatomy in different ways. Making them prime targets for creature if it came again. Making them, like you said, more muscular, hairy, and bigger. Also thinking that, even though I wanted to imply it in the story, Phil and Tom become closer than just friends. Ive got more plans. Give me your ideas!
Lenny
5/3/17, 3:17 PM
Beautiful story. Almost makes me want to be a homophobe so I can get a bigger ass to let guys fuck.