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5/4/17, 1:52 AM
I hope Terry decides to control his brother finally.
5/4/17, 1:48 AM
So glad you've returned to Area 51. Brilliant work, Topaz! You outta migrate some of your other work here too (like the Various Techniques saga) Also, wondering how the epilogue of "Inside Area 51" (File #02?) fits into this new storyline or has it been retconned out?
Anonymous
5/4/17, 1:06 AM
Love this series and this one in particular. Was so hoping a little brother on brother would happen but it was good just the same
K. Malone
5/4/17, 1:05 AM
As a unabashed furry I've haunted sofurry for years I'll have to look this centaur story up there. You've done a god job so far with this renewed series of presenting the various creatures and giving them their own stories. This latest one as a break from the military base setting was a really good move in my opinion. I feel like the minotaur comment was a sly joke and it certainly raises questions in my head. It will be interesting to see. Tanukis are a Japanese mythological creature. Raccoon/bear/badger beings who walk on two legs they're gentle tricksters who enjoy getting drunk and confusing people. Tanukis in the mythology have oversized balls that they can grow and shrink on command and they use as weapons. They can shape shift into humans but the longer they hide as humans the more they turn back into their tanuki. The animated movie Pom Poko is a pretty faithful rendition of their mythology. I doubt you'd use them as they don't fit your aesthetic or this story series themes and style (which was my assumption for orcs and centaurs as well). Anyway now that I've bored you perhaps my web browser is misbehaving but it seems like chapter 2 hasn't posted yet. any news on that?
Anonymous
5/4/17, 12:10 AM
A great start. Time to make some jock bottom boys. ☺️
Anonymous
5/3/17, 11:31 PM
I liked the story. Thanks for letting the straight guy do the sucking and swallowing.
topaz172@aol.com
5/3/17, 9:43 PM
Thanks K.M. I tend to write porn and then end up world-building and examining the cultural implications. Centaurs...already done about ten years ago (in their own universe)...over on the 'sofurry' site. Minotaurs, yeah its possible with the right 'angle' Tanukis?.. I will have to look up what that is! Orcs?...no, not my thing. The trick is in building the bigger story whilst keeping enough money shots for the chapter-reader.
UchihaDEMS
5/3/17, 9:37 PM
You can always control and older jock, I mean, it doesnt have to be young to be a "jock". Also, if he likes tall black socks, does that means he has a foot fetish? Please say yes!
Anonymous
5/3/17, 9:18 PM
Thanks, EdIam!
K. Malone
5/3/17, 8:14 PM
This and the Pixie story really do explore the "body horror" angle and the natural oddness and alien nature of this other world. The overall alien weirdness and strangeness isn't my particular interest but you know what you're doing with planning out the inevitable extremes and the ways this sort of world can head. Of course you showed that years ago with your other works but its good to see it playing out here. The uses of the goo and the pixies expanding their minds over swarm regions and into different physical shapes was well executed. the way the goo could form independent shape shifting pieces for specific jobs was a nice touch. Great job overall. That said this story seems to end on an odd cliffhanger. A lot of threads with the other men "escaping" and the ending with the scientist just seem loose and not tied up. Will there be more to this particular series. Also other bodies were used with the pixie swarm did they also become proto goo and just weren't lucky enough to find sentience again? Will the Giulio slime reconstitute their minds or just absorb their sludge?