Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/3/17, 11:31 PM
I liked the story. Thanks for letting the straight guy do the sucking and swallowing.
topaz172@aol.com
5/3/17, 9:43 PM
Thanks K.M. I tend to write porn and then end up world-building and examining the cultural implications. Centaurs...already done about ten years ago (in their own universe)...over on the 'sofurry' site. Minotaurs, yeah its possible with the right 'angle' Tanukis?.. I will have to look up what that is! Orcs?...no, not my thing. The trick is in building the bigger story whilst keeping enough money shots for the chapter-reader.
UchihaDEMS
5/3/17, 9:37 PM
You can always control and older jock, I mean, it doesnt have to be young to be a "jock". Also, if he likes tall black socks, does that means he has a foot fetish? Please say yes!
Anonymous
5/3/17, 9:18 PM
Thanks, EdIam!
K. Malone
5/3/17, 8:14 PM
This and the Pixie story really do explore the "body horror" angle and the natural oddness and alien nature of this other world. The overall alien weirdness and strangeness isn't my particular interest but you know what you're doing with planning out the inevitable extremes and the ways this sort of world can head. Of course you showed that years ago with your other works but its good to see it playing out here. The uses of the goo and the pixies expanding their minds over swarm regions and into different physical shapes was well executed. the way the goo could form independent shape shifting pieces for specific jobs was a nice touch. Great job overall. That said this story seems to end on an odd cliffhanger. A lot of threads with the other men "escaping" and the ending with the scientist just seem loose and not tied up. Will there be more to this particular series. Also other bodies were used with the pixie swarm did they also become proto goo and just weren't lucky enough to find sentience again? Will the Giulio slime reconstitute their minds or just absorb their sludge?
K. Malone
5/3/17, 8:08 PM
A really interesting use of mermaids and sirens and a good overall set up and story. I don't have much more to add beyond another nod to the originality of your work and the various ways your ideas play out. Good job!
K. Malone
5/3/17, 8:07 PM
A well done sexual farce is hard to pull off (comedy in general is difficult) and while I didn't enjoy all of the humor I appreciated the effort put into the work and the details. The exploration of the other world's culture and society was really nicely played and the transmutations and mind warping was really well written. Funny, silly, and erotic at the right moments I was really amused. Great job continuing the series and I hope there will be more to it at some point. I realize this isn't your style so I doubt it will be written but I do wonder if orcs, tanukis, minotaurs, and centaurs also exist in this continuum. Overall great job!
K.Malone
5/3/17, 8:01 PM
I remember reading this story on the EMCSA and loving it then. Excellent use of the way the narrator's perceptions changed with events and how the story shifted over time. The subtle moments where Jay and Ice realized something was off but then forgot about it. I'd have enjoyed a bit more detail with the satyr tf but really overall I am happy to see this reposted here and new chapters in the series. That said the Satyrs clearly have a much harder time changing the humans and absorbing this universe then the pixies, goos, and even elves it seems. Such a pitty. Still the new reworked setting and backstory in the new chapters is excellent.
Anonymous
5/3/17, 7:42 PM
Very hot... Love ur stories
Anonymous
5/3/17, 7:41 PM
Great story... Great series