Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/1/17, 11:06 PM
Sexy as hell all the way through-- Although one gripe I have with the ending, however minor, is that I think it would have worked better if Frank talked in his original accent. Still super sweet way to end this big raunchy pseudo-horror-mystery.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 10:24 PM
Looking forward to seeing what Mike would become in a moment. Love this!!
Anonymous
5/1/17, 10:14 PM
awesome!!! So glad to have you back writing. I've loved your stuff for years. Especially the Area 51 series and the Various Techniques series. Wonderful to have new stories from you. Can't wait for the rest!!
topaz172@aol.com
5/1/17, 9:56 PM
There are two more chapters already in spiral in-box awaiting publication and another ready to upload once I'm sure the other two are up
Anonymous
5/1/17, 9:54 PM
Next time, wanna see Mike's friend be infected. It would be more entertaining or scary to see those of whom the readers (or the protagonist) know personalities were changed. It was also true how they felt when they were attacked by their friend without or with a bit of trace of who he was before the curse.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 9:48 PM
Great to see it continues fast!! I personally prefer to avoid using "our protagonist." Otherwise, it's hot and hot and hot. Can't wait next ; )
Anonymous
5/1/17, 9:48 PM
Wow...that was excellent....great companion to the amazing Area 51 Great great job
Anonymous
5/1/17, 9:25 PM
LOL! This is so wild and arousing! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
ghostwriterde@yahoo.com
5/1/17, 9:13 PM
Hello, Thanks for the words of encouragement! I am working on a full fledged novel but I will continue this story as time allows. Let me respond to your comments. @nycboot: Write as much as you want about the Yucatan peninsula! It is an awesome place and I encourage everyone to visit. FYI the archaeological facts of the story are all true! I made my own research about Chin and the related rites before writing this piece. @shortnlookn: I do have big plans for War moving forward but the main characters still need to discover the contents of the fourth passage. @Anonymous: Sorry if you were confused. You are absolutely right in your logic, it is Mike who says: " It’s not your fault. This whole trip was my idea in the first place." I deemed mentioning the speaker irrelevant since logic dictates that Mike is the speaker of the phrase. @Ken: So glad you liked it! It will continue but I cannot say when, please be patient. I will be introducing more of everything you mentioned and more domination and humiliation too. Keep the comments flowing and enjoy.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 8:12 PM
We need Gym Maintenance 2 or Locker Room Maintenance (LRM): )