Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/1/17, 9:48 PM
Wow...that was excellent....great companion to the amazing Area 51 Great great job
Anonymous
5/1/17, 9:25 PM
LOL! This is so wild and arousing! Can't wait to see the next chapter!
ghostwriterde@yahoo.com
5/1/17, 9:13 PM
Hello, Thanks for the words of encouragement! I am working on a full fledged novel but I will continue this story as time allows. Let me respond to your comments. @nycboot: Write as much as you want about the Yucatan peninsula! It is an awesome place and I encourage everyone to visit. FYI the archaeological facts of the story are all true! I made my own research about Chin and the related rites before writing this piece. @shortnlookn: I do have big plans for War moving forward but the main characters still need to discover the contents of the fourth passage. @Anonymous: Sorry if you were confused. You are absolutely right in your logic, it is Mike who says: " It’s not your fault. This whole trip was my idea in the first place." I deemed mentioning the speaker irrelevant since logic dictates that Mike is the speaker of the phrase. @Ken: So glad you liked it! It will continue but I cannot say when, please be patient. I will be introducing more of everything you mentioned and more domination and humiliation too. Keep the comments flowing and enjoy.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 8:12 PM
We need Gym Maintenance 2 or Locker Room Maintenance (LRM): )
Anonymous
5/1/17, 7:02 PM
The repetition among Jay, Alex and Rick was a big plus...
Ken
5/1/17, 6:59 PM
AWESOME..LOVED it. I hope it continues. Curse the other bashers (tiny dick, big assed bottoms) get back to school and turn others, (gay guys into big dick muscle studs) and keep it going!!!
Anonymous
5/1/17, 6:41 PM
Great story!! I would love to see it ends where Rick did a promotion like Jay and Billy.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 6:39 PM
Excellent story....great work!
UchihaDEMS
5/1/17, 4:37 PM
I love incest, I like to take control of dads/mature males so don't worry xD Those and the use of black victims, are not that common around so I do appreciate it.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 2:34 PM
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