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Anonymous
5/1/17, 2:34 PM
https://gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/2508
TheWanderer
5/1/17, 7:10 AM
How about giving him the ability to shapeshift?
TheWanderer
5/1/17, 7:02 AM
Yeah...I kinda just wanted some incest action :-p XD So I kinda just want to set up the dad first, didn't realize it's similar to Dat Spicy Ramen story until someone pointed it out. Also, being able to charm the bully at his own house is safer than charming him at school (being interrupted and all, and well I don't want to write that XD) Do keep in mind that I write whatever my fantasy is at the moment, so it could be very similar to stories I've read that turns me on the most (which usually follows the same storyline) By the way, for anyone who don't know, "DaiChu" is actually a reference to a mind control game named "A Spell for All" which is mostly straight content with only 2 charmable male atm. Do check it out if you're bisexual or don't mind the straight stuff, it's hot!
Anonymous
5/1/17, 5:29 AM
Incredible story! Just one part confused me: *“I’m sorry.” The softness of my voice was overwhelmed by its new bass. “It’s not your fault. This whole trip was my idea in the first place.” It was true. Mike wanted to specialize on the Mayan culture and had asked me to come along. I was more interested in Japanese and Chinese cultures but thought the experience would be good for me nonetheless.* How would the trip be his idea if Mike was the one studying Mayan culture and had asked him to come along?
Kylr79
5/1/17, 3:09 AM
Awesome start. Can't wait to see where you go with this.
shortnlookn@yahoo.com
5/1/17, 1:38 AM
Loved this and will be looking forward to the next part. I hope War under goes the proper transformation as a gay basher but maybe it affects him different since he wasn't in the chamber.
Apr 23, 2017
5/1/17, 1:14 AM
Love love LOVE it!
Anonymous
4/30/17, 11:51 PM
I'm confused why he needs the dad's help... he literally could just walk up to the bully and say DaiChu and that'd solve the problem. Sure, the author could be going for a mind fuck or revenge by having both dad and bully under the protagonists control, but considering how subby the dad became he probably could have skipped that and just made the bully a depraved perverted whatever from the getgo. Other than the giant ass plot hole, I thought the story was hot, despite being eerily similar to the intro of another story on here recently.
4/30/17, 11:04 PM
Fun story - thanks! I've been planning a story also set in the Yucatan peninsula - so I don't want you to think I'm intentionally copying you (very different - more of a solitaire realization). Although "Chin" doesn't sound exactly Mayan. ;)
Anonymous
4/30/17, 9:51 PM
When the transformation is complete, he also knows a phone number. The phone number of the last owner/creator, his new master.