Recent Comments

ghostwriterde@yahoo.com
5/1/17, 9:13 PM
Hello, Thanks for the words of encouragement! I am working on a full fledged novel but I will continue this story as time allows. Let me respond to your comments. @nycboot: Write as much as you want about the Yucatan peninsula! It is an awesome place and I encourage everyone to visit. FYI the archaeological facts of the story are all true! I made my own research about Chin and the related rites before writing this piece. @shortnlookn: I do have big plans for War moving forward but the main characters still need to discover the contents of the fourth passage. @Anonymous: Sorry if you were confused. You are absolutely right in your logic, it is Mike who says: " It’s not your fault. This whole trip was my idea in the first place." I deemed mentioning the speaker irrelevant since logic dictates that Mike is the speaker of the phrase. @Ken: So glad you liked it! It will continue but I cannot say when, please be patient. I will be introducing more of everything you mentioned and more domination and humiliation too. Keep the comments flowing and enjoy.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 8:12 PM
We need Gym Maintenance 2 or Locker Room Maintenance (LRM): )
Anonymous
5/1/17, 7:02 PM
The repetition among Jay, Alex and Rick was a big plus...
Ken
5/1/17, 6:59 PM
AWESOME..LOVED it. I hope it continues. Curse the other bashers (tiny dick, big assed bottoms) get back to school and turn others, (gay guys into big dick muscle studs) and keep it going!!!
Anonymous
5/1/17, 6:41 PM
Great story!! I would love to see it ends where Rick did a promotion like Jay and Billy.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 6:39 PM
Excellent story....great work!
UchihaDEMS
5/1/17, 4:37 PM
I love incest, I like to take control of dads/mature males so don't worry xD Those and the use of black victims, are not that common around so I do appreciate it.
Anonymous
5/1/17, 2:34 PM
https://gayspiralstories.com/newStory/show/2508
TheWanderer
5/1/17, 7:10 AM
How about giving him the ability to shapeshift?
TheWanderer
5/1/17, 7:02 AM
Yeah...I kinda just wanted some incest action :-p XD So I kinda just want to set up the dad first, didn't realize it's similar to Dat Spicy Ramen story until someone pointed it out. Also, being able to charm the bully at his own house is safer than charming him at school (being interrupted and all, and well I don't want to write that XD) Do keep in mind that I write whatever my fantasy is at the moment, so it could be very similar to stories I've read that turns me on the most (which usually follows the same storyline) By the way, for anyone who don't know, "DaiChu" is actually a reference to a mind control game named "A Spell for All" which is mostly straight content with only 2 charmable male atm. Do check it out if you're bisexual or don't mind the straight stuff, it's hot!