Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/30/17, 11:51 PM
I'm confused why he needs the dad's help... he literally could just walk up to the bully and say DaiChu and that'd solve the problem. Sure, the author could be going for a mind fuck or revenge by having both dad and bully under the protagonists control, but considering how subby the dad became he probably could have skipped that and just made the bully a depraved perverted whatever from the getgo. Other than the giant ass plot hole, I thought the story was hot, despite being eerily similar to the intro of another story on here recently.
4/30/17, 11:04 PM
Fun story - thanks! I've been planning a story also set in the Yucatan peninsula - so I don't want you to think I'm intentionally copying you (very different - more of a solitaire realization). Although "Chin" doesn't sound exactly Mayan. ;)
Anonymous
4/30/17, 9:51 PM
When the transformation is complete, he also knows a phone number. The phone number of the last owner/creator, his new master.
Anonymous
4/30/17, 9:38 PM
Amazing Amazing. I hope you keep going. Thanks so much!
Anonymous
4/30/17, 9:05 PM
Skinny new gym comers need to be fixed and become a part of Maintenance: )
Anonymous
4/30/17, 5:02 PM
really really hope this one gets continued. damn hot!
UchihaDEMS
4/30/17, 4:22 PM
I'm glad I am not the only one who thoughts It looked like a previous story on this site xD In any case, I always look forward for your stories so keep it coming!
Art
4/30/17, 3:14 PM
Very hot story. I hope that you will add more.
4/30/17, 3:00 PM
Nice start!
Anonymous
4/30/17, 2:13 PM
Depends where it goes next