Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/26/17, 12:48 AM
@Edlam, well done on taking all these criticism so well :) Always love your stories
B
4/26/17, 12:46 AM
Would love more of the ginger family scene. I love how they're so oblivious to the perverted things going on around them. Also the fact that they're homophobes. Would love the professor punish them for being so rude. ;)
Anonymous
4/25/17, 10:54 PM
EdIam, thanks for giving us some crossover for this story!
Anonymous
4/25/17, 10:53 PM
EdIam and tomozco! Two of my favorite writers of all time! Good to see you!
4/25/17, 9:56 PM
Please do continue! Maybe he can add more guys to his harem?
Anonymous
4/25/17, 9:45 PM
_Very_ nice. Unintended consequences, hot sex... Oh yes. Do continue. Or write something else entirely. But write!
tomozco
4/25/17, 9:42 PM
Well worth the wait, Edlam...another excellent piece!!! Nice to see some interesting twists and new plots as well. Keep writing what pleases you...the element of surprise and unexpected plots is what makes it all fun and exciting...for me at least! Keep it up!!!
Anonymous
4/25/17, 9:01 PM
not only muscle heads are sexy ... just saying ... bring a cute chubby bear into this
4/25/17, 4:59 PM
No worries, y'all. I'm gonna write what I enjoy writing regardless of the praise or the criticisms. If you've seen my responses in previous chapters, I've always been happy just writing what I wanna write. I realize it's not for everyone but, honestly, the only person I'm trying to entertain and turn on is me. I like a twisty-turny story line with lots of moving parts...makes it more exciting for me. If it's too much for you, I get that and respect that. I love where I'm going with this (I want it to be like the gay erotic hypno version of Game of Thrones :P ) and I'm excited to be able to wrap up my previous story and take this one to home plate. Then, yeah, I'm definitely doing some one off stories. But this one, yeah, it's complex and there are lots of characters. But dang, I enjoy it. :D Love to all of you!!!
4/25/17, 4:27 PM
Yeah, this story has gone too far into the bizarre and the wackadoodle. Also could have used a recap 'cause with way too many moving parts and the amount of time between chapters I'm not even sure who is who. Here's hoping for a simpler story and good winning over evil in the near future...