Recent Comments

4/25/17, 4:59 PM
No worries, y'all. I'm gonna write what I enjoy writing regardless of the praise or the criticisms. If you've seen my responses in previous chapters, I've always been happy just writing what I wanna write. I realize it's not for everyone but, honestly, the only person I'm trying to entertain and turn on is me. I like a twisty-turny story line with lots of moving parts...makes it more exciting for me. If it's too much for you, I get that and respect that. I love where I'm going with this (I want it to be like the gay erotic hypno version of Game of Thrones :P ) and I'm excited to be able to wrap up my previous story and take this one to home plate. Then, yeah, I'm definitely doing some one off stories. But this one, yeah, it's complex and there are lots of characters. But dang, I enjoy it. :D Love to all of you!!!
4/25/17, 4:27 PM
Yeah, this story has gone too far into the bizarre and the wackadoodle. Also could have used a recap 'cause with way too many moving parts and the amount of time between chapters I'm not even sure who is who. Here's hoping for a simpler story and good winning over evil in the near future...
Anonymous
4/25/17, 4:25 PM
Awesome story, as usual!!!
Anonymous
4/25/17, 4:24 PM
Anthony's musclehead friends should join the festivities. Plus, the heavy set, nerdy kid that Anthony bullied - get him to train and diet so that he becomes buff, then have him become Anthony's master. Entertaining implications!!!
Anonymous
4/25/17, 4:16 PM
AWESOME, AS USUAL!!!
Anonymous
4/25/17, 4:15 PM
Dear Writer Were you happy with the final product? If so, then the haters' "opinion" matters not. You should simply respond, "Blow it out your ass". Tying in characters from various stories into one synthesized story is not easy. Keeping all those characters consistent is difficult. Be proud that you were able to carry it off effectively, and as a good wordsmith.
TheWanderer
4/25/17, 3:55 PM
How dare you knocked that pizza to the ground! I paid for that! XDD The "yes" head shake instead of head nod confused me a bit but I do realize it could be another culture It would be nice if you continue but I do realize it's hard to continue with these kind of stories (at least for me :-p)
Anonymous
4/25/17, 1:26 PM
That was terrific....thanks
lloyd311@aol.com
4/25/17, 12:52 PM
Maybe? You gotta! It's just great. Please continue...
VRL
4/25/17, 12:21 PM
Hmm how many stories have we seen where the villain loses, heroes ride off into the sunset victorious,i mean edlam made his main character a minor character and his villain into a protagonist,that takes major balls,and dont tell me alex isnt the protagonist right now,weve moved all our focus from jake to alex,following his motivations and evil doing(protagonists can be bad too eg god of war,heavy rain,shadow of the colossus etc) alex even has an antagonist in the story,unbeknownst to him for now, If edlam wants to take his story one way who are we,his fans to tell him not to go the way he wants to,and maybe Alex gets his in the end,maybe not,who cares,its edlams choice not ours