Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/25/17, 4:16 PM
AWESOME, AS USUAL!!!
Anonymous
4/25/17, 4:15 PM
Dear Writer Were you happy with the final product? If so, then the haters' "opinion" matters not. You should simply respond, "Blow it out your ass". Tying in characters from various stories into one synthesized story is not easy. Keeping all those characters consistent is difficult. Be proud that you were able to carry it off effectively, and as a good wordsmith.
TheWanderer
4/25/17, 3:55 PM
How dare you knocked that pizza to the ground! I paid for that! XDD The "yes" head shake instead of head nod confused me a bit but I do realize it could be another culture It would be nice if you continue but I do realize it's hard to continue with these kind of stories (at least for me :-p)
Anonymous
4/25/17, 1:26 PM
That was terrific....thanks
lloyd311@aol.com
4/25/17, 12:52 PM
Maybe? You gotta! It's just great. Please continue...
VRL
4/25/17, 12:21 PM
Hmm how many stories have we seen where the villain loses, heroes ride off into the sunset victorious,i mean edlam made his main character a minor character and his villain into a protagonist,that takes major balls,and dont tell me alex isnt the protagonist right now,weve moved all our focus from jake to alex,following his motivations and evil doing(protagonists can be bad too eg god of war,heavy rain,shadow of the colossus etc) alex even has an antagonist in the story,unbeknownst to him for now, If edlam wants to take his story one way who are we,his fans to tell him not to go the way he wants to,and maybe Alex gets his in the end,maybe not,who cares,its edlams choice not ours
Golf
4/25/17, 11:18 AM
I think it's very funny. if you feel disgusted, don't read it. that's all. it's like a movie. you don't like it, move on with your life. let others read it. oh i forgot some people love to read love story. hahahah
AeonFlux
4/25/17, 10:37 AM
Keep on writing...........and I need some of the same dosis......;-)
Anonymous
4/25/17, 10:24 AM
Please continue with maybe some of his friends
Oct 3, 2016
Anonymous
4/25/17, 8:40 AM
please process me it was so sexy to read that story