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Apr 23, 2017
Anonymous
4/23/17, 3:48 AM
That's so dark!
Cooler
4/23/17, 1:52 AM
I think would be too predictable if Chris uses his power on Jake or in other teammates. Don't get me wrong, I'm sure you would make good chapters using both guys or even the whole school, but we've seen that a lot of other stories, and the point was to take revenge against Scott. If you decide to take control over Jake or others, why don't make them bullies? Or maybe Chris would turn the whole team into horny nerd guys. A reversal story? you mean, the bully taking total control over his victim? Hmm... I don't know. Maybe the bully would turn a normal guy into a total wimp or a loser. Would be interesting to see that in other future story.
Anonymous
4/23/17, 12:54 AM
You've gotta to finish this story! Go quirky, off-the-wall ending. More fun that way.
Anonymous
4/23/17, 12:44 AM
It is hot, keep it up.
Anonymous
4/22/17, 4:52 PM
This is excellent. I like the way you are presenting each side. Scott's vision at the end of No. 3 was hot. Can't wait to see how that plays out.
Anonymous
4/22/17, 4:15 PM
So sexy
Anonymous
4/22/17, 3:57 PM
Perhaps It is time for some jock boy ass to be used & enjoyed by Chris. Maybe some of Scott's teammates could watch. Great story! This is much better than the turnaround in your adventurine story. I hated the way that one ended.
Anonymous
4/22/17, 3:24 PM
Please don't stop! Would love to see how this ends
David S
4/22/17, 3:20 PM
Oh yes, please do continue. Loving this story a lot!
4/22/17, 2:13 PM
I agree, I always hesitate to write a reversal which could be equally as hot. What do you think guys ?