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hairyartist
9/4/24, 1:15 PM
this is still the hottest series, thank you!
Sep 3, 2024
hairyartist
9/4/24, 1:11 PM
I love it, thanks!
9/4/24, 12:41 PM
🔥John. Can’t wait for the next chapter
Boomer
9/4/24, 11:21 AM
Please keep up the dark turn this story has taken. So few stories on here really commit to the dark implications of mind control so it’s very refreshing and exciting to read If you’re enjoying it, of course
9/4/24, 10:39 AM
Really love this world! Always love when it's actually a based-in-reality story.
9/2/24, 9:11 PM
Hope to see the next part soon. This story is amazing! Hope the bully’s get some wedgies and pantsing and Lance gets an atomic or hanging wedgie, some tickling and spanking. Maybe even a lil hypnosis 👀

9/2/24, 10:22 PM
@[Siren Hypno](/user/show/10045827) Thank you for your kind words; comments like these mean so much to me, you have no idea. I'm trying to figure how to incorporate atomic wedgies and also thought about hypnosis once or twice, but stuff like that is likely not until further into the story. Hopefully, I can weave those threads relatively easily once I get a few more wheels turning.

9/4/24, 9:49 AM
@[NewsScene](/user/show/270454) Atomic wedgie either via a Gadget or through bullies. They should get their fair share as well sooner or later. Hypnosis via a gadget/ spiral sounds possible. However you decide, I’m always looking forward to new chapters 😇
9/4/24, 8:29 AM
The Site is real. I will subscribe and join the Church. Al hail Lord Phallus!
DMK
9/4/24, 2:46 AM
Thank you Demonicus Satani (Solo) for acknowledging our comments , very nice of you & feels nice , well done ! 🤗

9/4/24, 5:43 AM
@[DMK](/user/show/10035742) :thumbsup:
9/1/24, 9:43 PM
Can't wait for more ! And more leather of course :wink:

9/4/24, 5:42 AM
@[John Kuir](/user/show/588303) Of course, bro.:wink:
Anon
9/4/24, 2:05 AM
@Pcm @anonymous I feel that forlorn at this point really sees Eddie as less a person and more a favorite fictional character at this point. Granted, that's probably the most he can feel considering everything. I mean from what you've mentioned he likes to literally roleplay as Collin sometimes with the memory Eddie so thats...cute but slightly disturbing considering everyrthing else. Not to mention, it's probably more likely forlorn wants to feel happy about getting Eddie regardless of what Eddie wants. It reminds me a bit of somebody liking an idealized image of somebody but not the whole person- so in reality forlorn could just be seen as chasing after his own pleasure in a cynical view. I'm sure in his mind, his actions will make Eddie happy...but well...demonic happiness is more akin to how those of slaanesh see joy. Eddie I can only hope manages to escape that fate. At this point, forlorn reminds me a bit of a seducing figure more akin to the biblical Delilah than anything else. Somebody who would lead Eddie down dark paths that should be avoided, and will more than happily betray a loved ones safety (which is exactly what happened to samson thanks to her- who died crushing his enemies by bringing down a temple while he was in it with his bare hands). Forlorn may love Eddie, but he really isn't healthy in that love, and it's debatable if that really is love or forlorn projecting his own self centered desires for pleasure. I might be very cynical in my reading here though. As foe this continent across the ocean, it seems they are more technologically advanced and in the gunpowder empire era. Hopefully, the gods terrorizing the areas and lands of the east and elsewhere aren't there. And it's not like the demons are focused there yet. Maybe they'll be dealing with more mundane threats...I can only hope. Hopefully nobody there has to go through the endless cycle of tragedies Eddie does here. I only pray the demons are too busy in the east to ever bother looking there. Not to mention the fact that it's likely the abyssal gaze would lay a smackdown on anybody trying to cross the seas. So they'll likely be safe. As for the east-west war, something tells me the north is going to get caught up in that and it's going to be a long grueling bloody mess. So more horror for everybody. Will this new continent have any connections to the kingdoms and lands we've seen here or be it's own thing altogether? Geographically it would make sense that there's no connection, but I think I remember you saying you'd like to allude to the kingdom in other works. Then again...considering how terrible things in the east and surrounding areas have gotten maybe its best this new continent has no connection to them. They're probably fighting enough amongst themselves already if it's a militarized continent/societies. However, I'd really find it fascinating if amidst everything forlorn and Eddie wind up with some complicated dynamic- I want Eddie to escape, but forlorn being mired in his affection for Collin would be fascinating to read through, as well as him roleplaying his human self. I'd argue there might be another way for demons to despair- knowing their loved ones are out there bit that they can't be with them. That might be worse than them dying, because they are still out there yet one cannot find them. If Eddie escapes and keeps himself away from the demons, such would likely drive forlorn near mad.

Pcm
9/4/24, 3:00 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) At the risk of making Forlorn more of an asshole than he already is, I would imagine the situation to be akin to an anime husbando. Sure you would want him tovbe real so you could claim him and 'have fun' with him, you even imagine yourself doing things to him and since he is not real, why would you care? Eddie became kinda like that to Forlorn. He was never real to Forlorn until now, just a fun fantasy. If he got away? That would be complicated. On one hand, you wouldnt feel sad if your favourite character from a novel could not become real. On the other hand, knowing that you had a chance to be with them but missed it, how would that make you feel? The thing is, Eddie will become real to Forlorn once they meet, and he will no longer just be a figment of imagination, will it? The next series will revolve around the theme of military ranks and imperialism and political corruption, with the Eldritch Aroboreal faction serving as the main antagonist. Thr Eldritch Arboreal, in his simplest understanding, is just an embodiment of trees and plants, but he is in actually the god of "harmony"...which makes him much more complex that what most understand him as. The Eldritch Aroboreal is also rather widespread, as he simply manifests as floral lifeform, so where it grows, he is there.

Anonymous
9/4/24, 3:13 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) So the next series will be plant-based transformation, and it related to uniform, I wonder how the people would look like had they transformed. And another thing about the antagonist, it relates to Harmony, which itself is what a person would want, to see something that resembling this to be a corruption, is interesting.

Pcm
9/4/24, 3:17 AM
@Anonymous Plant will be a part of it. Plant people are meant to be mass produced as drones to fight, and it is amongst the weaker of the Aroboreal power. Eddie is an exception

Anonymous
9/4/24, 3:34 AM
@[Pcm](/user/show/10039396) Oh, right. Eddie is a plant person, but why is he an exception, and how he was born? Will you elaborate on it on the next series?

Pcm
9/4/24, 3:41 AM
@Anonymous He was made to be a clone of someone powerful, he was specifically made to almost mimic a real person. He also lives for a long time and even fell in love.

Pcm
9/4/24, 5:05 AM
@[Anon](/user/show/10049352) With regards ro the kingodm and the new land in particular, there is minimal interaction between them. However, thus new land has unique technology tgT alliws them to spy on the kingdom while the kingdom has none, even if they can't physcially be there, (imagine airplane), os they are aware of the invasion going on, but does not view it as a threat. (Tgey don't know that demons can alter reality and believe their power extends only to psychological alteration, so their technology is enough to combat them. They would be half right, Sybarite's reality alteration is limited in scope and power). So they live on as normal, maybe formulate a plan in a wartoom or so for the invasion, having 20-30 meetings about it that ultimately won't accomplish anything other than listing thing for "pending further studies".