Recent Comments

Robert M
4/20/17, 11:40 PM
Thanks
Anonymous
4/20/17, 6:12 PM
Scotts been dealt with nicely. Time for him to start wearing just compression shorts and muscle shirts. . since Scotts no more than a jock toy now, maybe Chris can start breaking Jake
havi
4/20/17, 6:03 PM
oh god, way too short :( i was about to request some piss, because that and the... other stuff is the hardest humiliation and then you already had that in, so hot. I love hypno stories with awarness, otherwise there is no humiliation, best story here
4/20/17, 4:21 PM
I visualized them completely naked so yeah they're barefooted.
Apr 20, 2017
Anonymous
4/20/17, 4:06 PM
Awesome
Apr 20, 2017
Anonymous
4/20/17, 2:57 PM
Great story! Loved it!!
Apr 20, 2017
TheWanderer
4/20/17, 2:44 PM
Nice~~~
Cliff
4/20/17, 2:25 PM
Hi Lloyd, first of all, because I'm not too into humiliation, so I just read the teaser, and my opinions are somewhat more about techniques than plots, because I don't think I can fairly judge the story/teaser is good or not. 1. I guess some descriptions about body/face/etc, can blend into somewhere between dialogues. I prefer that way because I don't have to read / remember all that characteristics immediately, I can see some actions, build some passion about chars first. 2. It's seems a 3rd person narrative story, so I guess there could be some more "inner thought" from every char. The physical humiliation is hot, but the mindset of "I shouldn't like it but I can't help myself " is hot too. Wondering if there are more about "Tommy / Peter / other chars thought " in the full story, because it's somewhat lack of in the teaser. 3. The US, Canada Amazon links, that last line of excerpt ( "and scorching hot alternate reality. ") is missing, maybe you'd like to modify them. I hope these comments could help you :)
primalhunter
4/20/17, 1:31 PM
Hot as always - can't tell you how many times I've bust a nut over this series? Any chance of a lion, horse, rhino or coyote TF?
Anonymous
4/20/17, 9:37 AM
Oh, damn! I mean, I love this story, this keeps improving and improving and the chapter was very good, , but it ended when it was going in a hot direction. I like your idea of Scott becoming dumb and at the same time, fully aware of what's happening to him, that would be a good source of humiliating moments. I like that he's having problems writting and reading, please, explore more of that in the future! Would be time to mess up Scott's image. He would commit stupid mistakes, like wear his clothes in a wrong way, or even clothes that are not made for him; he could comb his hair in silly ways or simply go around with a vacant, dumb facial expression, drooling like a retarded moron.