Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/19/17, 9:00 PM
You are my best friend ever. THANK YOU!!
UchihaDEMS
4/19/17, 7:51 PM
I just said that it was a shame, I wasn't trying to impose him anything~
Anonymous
4/19/17, 7:02 PM
Man, this is great. I'd love a reversal in the future. When Willy learns to from his brother to make Ben submissive.
Anonymous
4/19/17, 6:58 PM
Next chapter please? Good to see older men dominated, are we going to see Wazza and Phil horded out. And Jamie get what's coming to him when the Doc finds out whats he's been up to,
Anonymous
4/19/17, 4:44 PM
Hot! I'm glad to see tou continued the story. There will be a part 3?
Anonymous
4/19/17, 3:29 PM
That was hot!! Great pics!!
Anonymous
4/19/17, 3:28 PM
That was hot!!!
Anonymous
4/19/17, 3:28 PM
That was hot! And beautifully written.
lloyd311@aol.com
4/19/17, 2:24 PM
Well, thanks! I am always open to constructive criticism!
Donkbutt
4/19/17, 2:08 PM
Hiya Lloyd, I didn't want to leave any specific comments about your story because.. well.. I don't like it. Especially as a teaser to a bigger story, it left me with no interest or desire to buy the full story. BUT! That's my personal opinion, it is literally just an opinion and doesn't reflect on the time and effort you've put into it OR the quality of your writing. If my opinion hurts you or makes you feel down about your work, please ignore it. You seem both open to and sensitive to criticism. In much the same way as paid teasers, flashing text and top of the page pinned stories: just scroll past me if I bother you.