Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/17/17, 9:56 PM
Sweet! Chapter 6 was perfect, very hot! But in my opinion, chapter 7 felt a little bit rush, everything happens very quickly, with few development, compared with the previous chapters. Anyway, it's very, very good. Would be good to know how the friends of the fancy metrosexual would react to see him turned into a rude, dirty man.
4/17/17, 8:41 PM
I still think that the sponsored story text could be better summarised. Something like: "Sponsored story teaser; a link is provided where you can purchase the full version." I'd also be supportive of locking each new sponsored story to the top of the first page, at least for a set period, like a week. I'm all for promoting the support of writing talent and I think this would be a great way to do it.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 8:39 PM
Wow that was awesome !! :-)
bucca
4/17/17, 7:33 PM
Very pleasant read, sucked me in! Almost faultless.
Paul
4/17/17, 6:58 PM
Affirmations are powerful your story is reinforcing
Anonymous
4/17/17, 6:00 PM
great job man, thank you
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:34 PM
There are so many levels to this story. I loved it!!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:33 PM
This posting should be highlighted as an example of how a first time writer takes the time to develop a story, work his craft, edit and create a final product. You should be very proud of your effort. How many first-timers do we read that should be embarassed? That is NOT the case with your story. You did very, very well.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:22 PM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:21 PM
That was hot!! Loved it.