Recent Comments

bucca
4/17/17, 7:33 PM
Very pleasant read, sucked me in! Almost faultless.
Paul
4/17/17, 6:58 PM
Affirmations are powerful your story is reinforcing
Anonymous
4/17/17, 6:00 PM
great job man, thank you
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:34 PM
There are so many levels to this story. I loved it!!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:33 PM
This posting should be highlighted as an example of how a first time writer takes the time to develop a story, work his craft, edit and create a final product. You should be very proud of your effort. How many first-timers do we read that should be embarassed? That is NOT the case with your story. You did very, very well.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:22 PM
Interesting!!
Anonymous
4/17/17, 4:21 PM
That was hot!! Loved it.
Willie Cici
4/17/17, 4:20 PM
This posting is the EDITED VERSION with the ending based on the comments votes.
Anonymous
4/17/17, 1:46 PM
Please post part 2 quickly
Anonymous
4/17/17, 9:33 AM
Great first story