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Sep 1, 2024
9/2/24, 2:28 AM
If he changes Manuel to be an old college buddy, Oliver might retroactively change his own history so that he's been getting hypnococked (and probably fucked) for years...
9/3/24, 10:45 AM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) Love this idea!
9/4/24, 12:45 AM
@[ControlMe](/user/show/2615973) There's also a chance that Manuel could end up catching the himbovirus from Oliver this way, escalating things further. Or perhaps he's already caught it in that version of events...
Sep 2, 2024
9/3/24, 5:59 AM
I too agree with the other comments. Your writing is superb. If there's a story that doesn't turn me on/not my kink/etc. I just skip it and go on my day, but this story got me hooked. Having said that, I too get the feeling this is going to be a downer. I thought that maybe Rob is going to dig his own grave, but he didn't spill the beans. I'm going to guess that Rob will force Alex to hide his lack of consent making the next chapter rough (to say the least). I'm dreading its release yet captivated by the story. I don't believe Rob is sorry or feels guilty anymore. He is pure evil that will never release Alex unless he'll be forced to do so. At least I hope that Rob doesn't play with his mind anymore. There's something much more intrusive and wicked about fucking up memory when the real Alex is still "alive" but caged. I don't think that Alex understands the curse enough to actually use it to his advantage. He could've asked his boss to give him more work and say and his in laws are in town and he needs an excuse to work late. Rob told him to always answer his messages, but he can block his number or turn his phone of so he will never receive them in the first place. He has to go straight home, but that doesn't mean he can take a certain route and just drive in circles to and talk to D. Will, since it's not a stop. Also, he never tried to ask someone to give him a counter command that will undo Rob's thus allowing him to escape. Alex needs to start thinking like a genie and bend Rob's wishes. Actually, this could be a very fun twist. I was debating myself if I should comment or not out of fear that you'll see it as criticism on your own fetishes and kinks even though it's really not. It's an emotional response to a very evocative story, which is a great thing and a sign of merit. It might be wise to wait until all chapters are released and I could check where it's going and if it will become hot for me again or not (at which case, I'll leave it to people who do like it). I hope made myself clear and didn't make it worse instead. Good luck!! P.S. putting the covers on while someone is stuck to your crotch? Really? That's just rude.
9/3/24, 12:52 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) I really love the out of the box ideas to Alex to work the curse to his advantage haha let's remember, he is seriously fatigued and in self-preservation mode. He is trying to collect himself, get through the day, and maintain that he has the confidence to get himself out of this mess. Maybe some of those strikes of inspiration will come later... if it's not too late. I'm sorry if the story is not going in the direction you'd hoped, but I appreciate your comment. I've made some comments about that under some other feedback provided. To your last comment - I know, right? How thoughtless of Rob!
9/4/24, 12:17 AM
@[Whisperlouder](/user/show/2186797) I see your point about Alex not being in the right mind to do this right now. I would still be very excited if it will be eventually implanted to the story and turn the "be careful what you wish for" trop on its head because in this case the "genie" is the victim and the wish maker is the villain. As for apologizing, there is definitely no need. My taste is my taste, and that doesn't mean that you need to betray your own just to suit me. I said it before and I'll say it again, your writing is top notch. I would've given the time to stay updated on the comments if I was so emotionally involved in the story. Speaking of, I know it's hard to separate an artist from their art so I can easily see how the comments here might hurt you. I'm glad to see that you are taking it so well. Be it by waiting for a binge or by staying tuned to the next chapter, I'm very curious to read what comes next... Unless it's more of Rob's vile disregard like the covers. If he, for example, uses all of the hot water leaving or drinks all the cild water (depends on the season) Alex with none, I will be left with no choice but using some very bad word.
Sep 2, 2024
Zander
9/3/24, 10:53 PM
I wonder if he will save Brent or leave and abandon him knowing that something is wrong with him?
Sep 2, 2024
9/3/24, 7:48 PM
I've been avidly following this story - the psychological detail and characterization is really top notch. Thanks for writing this! I wouldn't be on this site if I didn't kink on some fucked up things, and there are stories that are more romantic or where everyone is happy for those that like them. Just chipping in that I appreciate that this story is here.
Sep 2, 2024
9/3/24, 7:11 PM
There was enough eroticism in the last episode that I believe the point of depicting the gradually changing psychology of the controllers and the controllee in this episode will be a good kick for the next erotic episode. I think the innocent and good Derek, who is trying to help his boss while investigating D.will, could fall into the same trap of mind control, and Rob could become more sinister as he and Frankie dominate Alex. I love this roller coaster of a novel, where as the eros intensifies, so do evil emotions like guilt and despair.
May 17, 2023
Anonymous
8/31/24, 8:28 PM
This was such a sweet and perfect love story I almost threw up. I will never read anything as good as this ever again I don’t think. Incredible work
9/3/24, 5:44 PM
@Anonymous I'm flattered by your sweet words. Thank you!
Sep 2, 2024
Anonymous
9/3/24, 5:08 PM
I can't wait to read more
Aug 14, 2024
Anonymous
9/3/24, 5:07 PM
Usually I'm not into feminization but this one omg Can't wait for part 3
Jul 17, 2020
Anonymous
9/3/24, 5:03 PM
I love the concept of a spnsorship changing people for the company. Opens doors for what ever line they are trying to accentuate in the future. I hope we see what happens to Eric in the end.
Aug 31, 2024
9/1/24, 3:54 AM
When I saw Scott being put into the mold, I thought of a [Sushi-making machine](https://youtu.be/x158Zu8pp6A?si=Flz5fLwsywsF19GL) . But when I saw the trailer for Terminator 2 you mentioned, wow! How come I don't remember this scene? It's really cool. I can imagine countless substandard men being placed on conveyor, fed into machines, and after a series of corrections, what came out of the factory were perfect drones/robots of the same specifications. Just thinking about it makes me excited.
9/1/24, 1:02 PM
@[Tofu83](/user/show/87624) The sushi-making machine also definitely works. You probably don't remember the teaser for Terminator 2 because this scene isn't in the movie. It was filmed specifically for the teaser trailer. It wasn't used for any else but only for that teaser. But it's so cool. Even in later films, such as Terminator Salvation or Genisys, they don't show Terminators getting their flesh by being placed in that mold. But that scene has always stuck with me. And served as inspiration of having been begin their reprogramming and body modification.
9/3/24, 4:57 PM
@[rubbrsome](/user/show/13662) I just watched Netflix's latest Terminator Zero. They changed their production method again. This time they put the skeleton in a pool and a strong guy climbed out. The naked Terminators lining up on both sides of the aisle are also a good sight. But I think the mold is more attractive.