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Apr 11, 2017
Kyle
4/16/17, 10:26 AM
Baralai, thank you, this was a superb story. And I enjoyed the grounding in science as well. Fantastic concept, brilliantly written (as always). Always a treat to see your work.
EJG
4/16/17, 10:19 AM
This pic (the hunk in the white cap,gets my dick hard!) kinda reminds me of what Alex & JJ might look like.Alex is clearly the smaller guy on the left,in grey cap,..and JJ,the HUNK in the white cap. https://68.media.tumblr.com/31f56865a4f2821e6fb2ed1af75a4d96/tumblr_ooda0nAd1A1rhljy4o1_540.png
Apr 14, 2017
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
4/16/17, 9:23 AM
Loved to read the story........any further ideas for the way back to earth ?????
4/16/17, 6:42 AM
I actually meant that more as "they were never under consideration to be at the party", not "I forgot about them". Having worked somewhat on the next chapter while this one was underway, it would've been difficult to forget about them. :) That said, though, you're on the right track otherwise. The time that Peter is away will close out some characters, introduce a one-off, and then move in a somewhat different direction for "Season 2", so to speak. You're absolutely right that this is intended as an episodic story, and it will continue in that vein, even if there's still a bit of a story arc. Even an episodic story has to have something tying the chapters together...or it does in my mind, anyway.
4/16/17, 6:28 AM
I put the story ahead 1 day. I actually didn't mean to this time, but then couldn't fix it. It'll fix itself in the next day, as soon as the next story is posted.
Apr 14, 2017
MalSkin
4/16/17, 5:44 AM
as someone has said this story was Spectacular. really good twist to it with everyone thinking it was Ryan who was going to convert the rest of the crew. Who would suspect Martin. Loved the ending........maybe when the crew get back to earth they will have to suppress the physical effects......(is there likely to be a follow up?) thanks very much for writing it
Anonymous
4/16/17, 5:17 AM
This is such a hot story, one of the hottest story I ever read. Please please please write more!
Anonymous
4/16/17, 3:59 AM
Really hot!!
Anonymous
4/16/17, 3:46 AM
It's the problem with 'multi-character' plot lines. In variably, you lose a character or two and then when they re-appear, it doesn't read convincingly. Peter, arrested, charged, and somehow, let go, would be an interesting plot line. It would allow the writer to take up different characters, finish off some characters, let the episodic nature of the story continue.
4/16/17, 3:02 AM
@Wang and first anon poster: All I'll say is that by virtue of where the story's gone, I obviously have to write Peter out for a bit, but I'm certainly not going to write him out for long. :) @Second anon poster: TBH, I never really thought of putting them in one way or the other. They're hot fuck-buddies for Peter, but with the exception of Scott, the people at the party are the ones Peter hypnotizes most often, so it made sense for them to be there. With him having to give suggestions to that many people at once, he'd want most of the party guests to be the guys that are the most easily controlled. The next chapter will cover what's going on with Lucas and his father in more detail, though, once I come back to this story.