Recent Comments

Nutiper
4/14/17, 11:22 PM
Hooray! Congrats on finishing this monumentally long and very fun series! I always enjoy your stories, and it was exciting to check the site and find this final chapter posted. A sweet and sexy conclusion to a series that was always a pleasure to read. Thank you for writing it!
Ed
4/14/17, 10:40 PM
Great story!!! Please continue it! Huge biker staches, bushy walrus, inmense handlebars on young guys... the posibilities are endelss... and very erotic! Great work.
Anonymous
4/14/17, 10:15 PM
Love it !!
Sadness
4/14/17, 9:09 PM
The hidden master turned out to be a bit character? Sadness.
Apr 14, 2017
Anonymous
4/14/17, 7:05 PM
Spectacular
4/14/17, 6:09 PM
Sounds very tempting!
Anonymous
4/14/17, 6:07 PM
I dont feel like this story was written by the real baralai, but i could be wrong thou
4/14/17, 3:34 PM
Hugh Michelsen (one of the Site Admin's) here. This story has been years in the making. I am so happy to see it published and available for anyone to read. If you like humiliation and reality warping, you'll definitely like it. Especially if you read those types of stories and find yourself wanting more. At 100,000 words, you definitely won't feel unsatisfied. Also, way to go Lloyd!
Jun 25, 2010
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
4/14/17, 1:56 PM
Perfecly writen.......I need some of that.....can I get it bottled ???
B-anonymous
4/14/17, 12:23 PM
I felt that the ending was ok; but I was left wondering what happened to the other characters left out. Birch, the coach, etc.