Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/16/17, 1:59 AM
I'm out of money right now, but I'm definitely interested, sounds very promising.
Apr 14, 2017
4/16/17, 1:49 AM
Excellent. Lovely build-up. Your story made me think that the turn on is not the sex (which is incidental) but the transformation - that's the ultimate turn on! Wonderful!
Donkbutt
4/15/17, 10:05 PM
Yah it's doing that thing again where the story stays at the top of the list, even though other stories are being updated. Possibly a bug in the forums?
Anonymous
4/15/17, 8:28 PM
It's the touch of realism and fantasy that made your story hot. Loved it!
Anonymous
4/15/17, 6:42 PM
Well this just got more interesting. I hope this leads to a happy ending for all of them tho.
Anonymous
4/15/17, 4:09 PM
The person commenting repeatedly about the cops and coaches is obviously the same person. You're not clever or sly. Great story, very fun and enjoyable.
wang@yopmail.com
4/15/17, 1:41 PM
Long time no see! It's great to see the new member and his interactions with the old ones. Hope to see Peter get away with it!
Apr 14, 2017
Anonymous
4/15/17, 10:05 AM
I stopped when i read steven hawkin and all i can imagine is this would be a stephen hawkin sexcapade or something haha
Anonymous
4/15/17, 6:40 AM
I liked the story. Perhaps in the sequel, Nathan can bottom or at least take a load in his mouth? Ps: I didn't mind the grammar issues. I look forward to your next story!
RobinHood70
4/15/17, 6:13 AM
This chapter is basically a "season finale". There are a couple of other stories I want to get out before I completely lose track of them. But I will be coming back to this one, don't worry.