Hope to see the next part soon. This story is amazing! Hope the bully’s get some wedgies and pantsing and Lance gets an atomic or hanging wedgie, some tickling and spanking. Maybe even a lil hypnosis 👀

The Site is real. I will subscribe and join the Church. Al hail Lord Phallus!

Thank you Demonicus Satani (Solo) for acknowledging our comments , very nice of you & feels nice , well done ! 🤗

Can't wait for more ! And more leather of course :wink:

@Pcm @anonymous I feel that forlorn at this point really sees Eddie as less a person and more a favorite fictional character at this point. Granted, that's probably the most he can feel considering everything. I mean from what you've mentioned he likes to literally roleplay as Collin sometimes with the memory Eddie so thats...cute but slightly disturbing considering everyrthing else. Not to mention, it's probably more likely forlorn wants to feel happy about getting Eddie regardless of what Eddie wants. It reminds me a bit of somebody liking an idealized image of somebody but not the whole person- so in reality forlorn could just be seen as chasing after his own pleasure in a cynical view. I'm sure in his mind, his actions will make Eddie happy...but well...demonic happiness is more akin to how those of slaanesh see joy. Eddie I can only hope manages to escape that fate. At this point, forlorn reminds me a bit of a seducing figure more akin to the biblical Delilah than anything else. Somebody who would lead Eddie down dark paths that should be avoided, and will more than happily betray a loved ones safety (which is exactly what happened to samson thanks to her- who died crushing his enemies by bringing down a temple while he was in it with his bare hands). Forlorn may love Eddie, but he really isn't healthy in that love, and it's debatable if that really is love or forlorn projecting his own self centered desires for pleasure. I might be very cynical in my reading here though. As foe this continent across the ocean, it seems they are more technologically advanced and in the gunpowder empire era. Hopefully, the gods terrorizing the areas and lands of the east and elsewhere aren't there. And it's not like the demons are focused there yet. Maybe they'll be dealing with more mundane threats...I can only hope. Hopefully nobody there has to go through the endless cycle of tragedies Eddie does here. I only pray the demons are too busy in the east to ever bother looking there. Not to mention the fact that it's likely the abyssal gaze would lay a smackdown on anybody trying to cross the seas. So they'll likely be safe. As for the east-west war, something tells me the north is going to get caught up in that and it's going to be a long grueling bloody mess. So more horror for everybody. Will this new continent have any connections to the kingdoms and lands we've seen here or be it's own thing altogether? Geographically it would make sense that there's no connection, but I think I remember you saying you'd like to allude to the kingdom in other works. Then again...considering how terrible things in the east and surrounding areas have gotten maybe its best this new continent has no connection to them. They're probably fighting enough amongst themselves already if it's a militarized continent/societies. However, I'd really find it fascinating if amidst everything forlorn and Eddie wind up with some complicated dynamic- I want Eddie to escape, but forlorn being mired in his affection for Collin would be fascinating to read through, as well as him roleplaying his human self. I'd argue there might be another way for demons to despair- knowing their loved ones are out there bit that they can't be with them. That might be worse than them dying, because they are still out there yet one cannot find them. If Eddie escapes and keeps himself away from the demons, such would likely drive forlorn near mad.

Holy crap a small top big sub story that doesn’t revolve around the same boring ass “himbos, groups, transformations”, I really hope you continue this

Hot beginning, hope the story continues.

Really looking forward to see where this goes, Hopefully a happy ending!

Niiice

@Anon @Anonymous Damn, I'm grateful for all the discussion going on in my story. It is a dream comes true to have so many people speculating on a story and directions. I am rather occupied right now, so the enxt chapters will take a while to come out, but hopefully within September or in early Ocotber. Churning out the ladt three chapters so soon after each other takes quite a bit of my free time and creative energy, but seeing your feedback makes it all worth it. I have established an outline for this story for quite a while now. However, your interest got me to extend the series. Originally, the idea is to start with Abandon corrupting Willaim, and the two demons would go on to corrupt Collin. The story would end with the three of them reunited but xhanged, ready to take on the world. Collin himself was the main character of a non-erotic fantasy novel I have abandonned beacause I don't think anyone would read it. In that story, Collin would sacrifice himself to save the Prince and leave his friends and lover behind. However, he was instead captured by his demonified fatger and, having already ensured that people he love are safe and hapoy, Collin realized he did not want to die from his innate medical conditio and gave in , becoming transformed. This story here has an echo of that plot, and I kept reworking ideas from that novel I never got to write. Eddie and Lys too were ones of them. They were an addition to the story here and I originally did not have a fixed plan for them. What I didn't expect was for people to like Eddie so much. I at first was afraid that he would not be well liked beyond being Collin's boyfriend, I t was why I dedicated a whole chapter to his adventure in wolfheim, a tie in to my much more popular series in hope of attracting you guys to his character. I'm glad that it kinda works. Another surprise for me was the fact that much of the audience did not want Eddie to become corrupted. I was under the impression that people would just root dor Eddie to get fucked and be turned as it would mean happiness for him... Now to reveal whatever my orginal plan for Eddie was or whether your reaction has changed it would be a major spoiler. I can say that I see many interesting ideas whther he escapes or falls or even tragically perishes, and very poignant and thought provoking ideas. There are ideas here that I would like to borrow certainly. Anyway, sorry for the rambling, thank you so much for your interesrt. I hope that you guys will stick to the end of tge story, which is only chapters away. And if you want, I will always be happy and eager to discuss any part of the story with you. About the demons and their societal structure, it is entirely chaotic. However, demons aren't generally ambitious and rather content with the roles they serve. After all, most of them have their realities altered to fit the roles they serve in the first place. The Demon Overlords are exception. However, they don't directly kill other demons or Overlords, no. They find ways to subjugate them through pleasure. It is their culture, kinda.