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Touchstone
4/4/17, 6:49 AM
Sorry, I don't have a Tumblr :s
Anonymous
4/4/17, 4:43 AM
So hot! Loved it!!
Anonymous
4/4/17, 4:40 AM
Interesting!
Feb 25, 2017
Anonymous
4/4/17, 2:50 AM
nice story dude love it 10/10 would read again
Anonymous
4/4/17, 2:29 AM
Great to see the jocks again! But I want more slaves! Where are cops? coaches? please!
Anonymous
4/4/17, 2:10 AM
Do you have a Tumblr page, Touchstone?
BankStreet
4/4/17, 12:46 AM
Glad to see you back. No one does it better.
Anonymous
4/4/17, 12:23 AM
Great story. Very well written.
4/3/17, 9:59 PM
Hot hot hot. Very sexy very cool. Love the serum and it's effects. Love how our main is controlling it all. Very very good. I hope they stay as his submissive obedient boys when the game is over. Especially the homophobes they should be made the most submissive. I do hope at least one of V the guys is not homophobic and actually accepting of it. That would be cool. The buttplay is very good. Love to see more.:)
Boone
4/3/17, 9:25 PM
Finally! I've been waiting anxiously for the next chapter. Thanks, Edlam, and good luck in Chicago! By the way, reading the story again, I've noticed that Alex and his new cops arrived to the station on Dave's car. That means the car was already splattered with the spunk that Cockforbrains milked from himself throughout the day; then Jizzson's cum, Kneelsfordick's cum, Frank's cum, and then Alex left Frank covering the car with even more semen. At this point, the car would be a mess! You definitely must use that car to humiliate Cockforbrains even more, or at least use it for something especially dirty. I think there would be very hot if Alex is especially sadistic with Dave and his friends, for being good straight cops. Would be fun if the mindfucked cops trash their own cars, so the police force would have a very pitiful laughable image, wearing cum stained uniforms and driving clunker cars covered with cum.