Recent Comments

Boone
4/3/17, 9:25 PM
Finally! I've been waiting anxiously for the next chapter. Thanks, Edlam, and good luck in Chicago! By the way, reading the story again, I've noticed that Alex and his new cops arrived to the station on Dave's car. That means the car was already splattered with the spunk that Cockforbrains milked from himself throughout the day; then Jizzson's cum, Kneelsfordick's cum, Frank's cum, and then Alex left Frank covering the car with even more semen. At this point, the car would be a mess! You definitely must use that car to humiliate Cockforbrains even more, or at least use it for something especially dirty. I think there would be very hot if Alex is especially sadistic with Dave and his friends, for being good straight cops. Would be fun if the mindfucked cops trash their own cars, so the police force would have a very pitiful laughable image, wearing cum stained uniforms and driving clunker cars covered with cum.
Anonymous
4/3/17, 6:51 PM
This is one of the best stories I've read this year. Real well written man, nice job!
4/3/17, 3:18 PM
The new story made me come back and visit the first chapter. Great concept and nice writing!
Anonymous
4/3/17, 2:19 PM
I liked it, good work, love the racial tfs
Mar 31, 2017
Anonymous
4/3/17, 2:16 PM
Excellent technique!!
Mutabear
4/3/17, 2:14 PM
I couldn't even get to the end before I was cumming. I love your stories and eagerly await more.
Anonymous
4/3/17, 12:44 PM
I love your stories and this is my new favorite
Anonymous
4/3/17, 11:13 AM
Great! I can't wait to see it :)
Anonymous
4/3/17, 11:00 AM
excellent, one of your best!
Anonymous
4/3/17, 8:47 AM
I fucking love this and the one before, pls keep it up