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Apr 21, 2016
3/28/17, 4:44 PM
No kitty was harmed during the writing of this story. Despite an occasional lapse into catty remarks and a somewhat feline nature--frequent naps, a love of chicken (especially cocks), loud purring when petted--the author of this story respects pussies so much that he keeps them at arms' length.
Anonymous
3/28/17, 4:25 PM
It's the slow, deliberate, clueless transformation that makes it hot.
MalSkin
3/28/17, 4:20 PM
loved this story slowly did it for Edward
swc158@yahoo.com
3/28/17, 4:13 PM
After 3 years, I suppose is against all hope to see a follow up chapter. Too bad, because I really liked this start.
Mar 25, 2017
Monstermash62
3/28/17, 3:04 PM
@Donkbutt I got significant feedback from people when I posted a teaser for my last paid work (Retroactive Changes) that people felt upset that they read through an entire chapter of a story only to find out that they'd have to pay to read the rest. The flashing red is intentionally ugly (and a little obnoxious) to ensure that no one is mislead by my post.
Mar 25, 2017
Monstermash62
3/28/17, 3:01 PM
@HyperMuscleMonster I hear you about getting turned on at the gym and totally get that :) I personally really enjoy slow transformations, of both the mind and the body. I think that Aardvark (console.aws.amazon.com) actually does them the best. It's definitely not my skill. I might try to play with teasing stuff out longer, and exploring more kinks and extremes in my next story. I also totally agree with you about the alternate ending. I didn't build to it in the regular story before the branch properly, and it was out of character and way too extreme. I also wasn't personally interested in the taboo, nonstandard attraction angle, but that was the only place to go with it. I do find amoral, non-empathic villains to be extremely hot, if they don't go too far. But the alternate ending was definitely not a great ending, and definitely not what I felt comfortable getting people to pay for (given the rest of the story). Thanks for all of the feedback!!!
Apr 21, 2016
Anonymous
3/28/17, 1:47 PM
But....what happened to the kitty!
Mar 25, 2017
Donkbutt
3/28/17, 1:16 PM
Why do we get flashing red text and top of the page promotions for paid story teasers? It's really obnoxious.
Papa Werebear
3/28/17, 12:30 PM
Cubwriter28, I'm so very turned on by your writing. Love the Bear transformations. You are doing a great job! 🐻 keep writing!
TheWanderer
3/28/17, 11:08 AM
I'm thinking something that involve a succubus (so that all the guys see the succubus as their ideal type). Either how they will compete with each other to seduce the succubus. Or the succubus tell them in order to have her, they have to do something (i.e. fuck the other guys and don't get fuck. Something like that)