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Mar 25, 2017
Monstermash62
3/28/17, 4:13 AM
Thanks for the comments, HyperMuscleMonster. I wrote all of Fish, and then after talking to Absqrst, decided that it definitely could've gone in a different direction. That's where the alt ending came from. Hopefully the original ending gave you enough of a sense of justice. I'm kicking around the idea of a sequel. It would probably be from Stu's perspective though, as opposed to Ash's. Haven't worked out any details yet. Could be from Ash's, possibly. Have to come up with some kind of character arch first. And even then, it'll probably take me another 3 years. In terms of the TFs progressing further, what would you have liked to see more of? More jocking out? More muscle? More time spent with the main characters enjoying everyone else's reaction to them? I'm a little surprised (kind of pleasantly) that most readers wanted to read more of any of it. I was worried that 60K words would be way too long.
Nick Bottom
3/28/17, 3:45 AM
Fisting. Lol. The ones who come first win (or lose, your call).
Mar 25, 2017
HyperMuscleMonster
3/28/17, 3:22 AM
Bought and read the story, it was pretty good. (would've preferred the TFs progress further, but that's more about my taste.. I love progressive MG fic.) The alt ending WAS a *little* bit hotter, just because there's more sex in it, but totally unsatisfying in the justice sense. (I hate those kinds of stories, assholes shouldn't win like that. I know some like it, but it absolutely destroys my interest.) Now, I would love to see a sequel to the main story, maybe one from Ash's perspective that continues with what was hinted at in the last pages. (With more MG, of course.)
Kazer
3/28/17, 12:58 AM
Damn this was really hot, great work! I loved the process of Jimmy's transformation and how the boss got used by him in the end there. Kinda makes me want to write about this kind of stuff more often. lol
Mar 25, 2017
3/28/17, 12:31 AM
Great origin info on the Fish story. You mentioned several awesome writers!
3/27/17, 9:20 PM
thanks for all the comments, I'm imagining scenarios for the next chapter :)
Anonymous
3/27/17, 6:47 PM
Happened too fast for me to cum :( was hot though
Mar 25, 2017
Anonymous
3/27/17, 4:29 PM
Great, great story. Just got the novel from Amazon and read it right through. Just wish it were longer.
The Yetti
3/27/17, 1:17 PM
Hey everybody wanted to drop in and thank everybody for the comments. To answer your questions. The next available time I'll be able uploading Mindscaping #5 Thanks!
Anonymous
3/27/17, 12:58 PM
Great!!