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Willie Cici
3/21/17, 3:55 PM
WINNERS ***** 1 - 3 - 5 - 7 ***** Sequel soon to follow.
Willie Cici
3/21/17, 3:41 PM
WINNERS ***** 1 - 3 - 6 - 7 ***** Sequel soon to follow.
Anonymous
3/21/17, 3:29 PM
u really have talent write more, i like it short and straight the point
Anonymous
3/21/17, 3:28 PM
I"m going to forgive the grammar/usage because this story is so hot. I'm still hard.
Mar 21, 2017
Anonymous
3/21/17, 3:19 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Mar 21, 2017
Lenny
3/21/17, 2:42 PM
I like big butts and I can not lie
Mar 21, 2017
TimNJ
3/21/17, 2:03 PM
HOT, and I want to go to that bakery!
Anonymous
3/21/17, 6:44 AM
Sentí este capítulo algo apresurado y más breve, pero no me quejo para nada, la historia va estupendamente. Ojalá te detuvieras a describir un poco más el aspecto actual de Edgar, y compararlo con lo límpio que solía ser. También sería interesante que mencionaras la forma en que reacciona la gente a su alrededor, o sus compañeros de trabajo. Solo son ideas sueltas, no pretendo cambiar tu trabajo, me encanta cómo vas manejando la historia, y gracias por tomar en cuenta mi sugerencia de semen en el cabello.
3/21/17, 5:14 AM
Well crafted and so hot. I'm f you want to branch further, maybe you can try one for the heroboi's perspective?
cigarcubatx
3/21/17, 4:50 AM
A little late to the party, but I wanted to chime in and say that I totally got what imp said about how he saw the transformation. He became powerful and strong, but lost reason, compassion, respect for others. He turned into something ugly- and I got that, even on the first read. Personally, I think it made the story better- but I find there's two kinds of tf pervs in the world. Those that like getting fucked up, warped into something antithetical to them by someone else, and those that like fulfilling dreams they couldn't otherwise. This is the former kind. And I got off on this a couple times. Hypermasculine traits combined with cigars? Right up my alley.