Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/11/17, 5:52 AM
Thanks, Edlam! Your loyal readers keep waiting for the next chapter. Good luck in Chicago! I hope your new life allows you to keep writing, you are very talented in this genre.
Anonymous
3/11/17, 4:14 AM
Headless bodies?! That's a new one! Is the narrator "Icha-ROD Crane"? Nyuk, nyuk!
Kyle
3/10/17, 11:44 PM
What a romantic story. Well done! Thank you.
Anonymous
3/10/17, 7:54 PM
wow can't believe it
TimNJ
3/10/17, 12:50 PM
I really enjoyed reading this one, it is rare to see a "power bottom" as the protagonist. The ending made me smile too.
Anonymous
3/10/17, 4:59 AM
Keep going. Maybe a precinct full of muscle sluts.
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
3/9/17, 6:21 PM
Is there a second part on the line ????????
Anonymous
3/9/17, 1:03 PM
I would have liked for Louis to have kept his original body & gone through the same transition. Great story!
Anonymous
3/9/17, 12:57 PM
Very sexually charged story! Perhaps the chief could interrogate some prisoners?