Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/9/17, 1:57 AM
ugh guys, Trump won, we get it, and not everyone here is liberal so really stop it with all this whining. it's embarassing.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 11:12 PM
I love this story would like a new part maybe about the brother or the football team all that fun in a scrum
PupAmak
3/8/17, 10:39 PM
Loved the whole series! I was really hoping Lou would end up under Daddy's power at some point though :)
Anonymous
3/8/17, 9:54 PM
You always do a great job!
3/8/17, 9:38 PM
Posted the series to Hypnosis for Guys! (Just to show y'all I'm not entirely done with it ;) )
Anonymous
3/8/17, 8:24 PM
Interesting, but there were almost no details on his change and "conversion" process. and did his appearance change at all ? details are important!
M
3/8/17, 8:03 PM
Another Great story! Keep on writing dude and do you mind giving me address for the gym?? ;@)
Wesley Bracken
3/8/17, 7:22 PM
No story is apolitical. Sex is politics. It isn't something you can opt out of. Questions of dominance and power, questions of what it means to be masculine and what kinds of masculinity we should and do value are all worthwhile issues that stories like this should address. My issue with this story is that it doesn't bother staking any sort of nuanced or thoughtful claim about any of that--you can argue that this story is a critique of this sort of masculine power, but I don't see any sort of critical eye being directed at the content here. If anything, it looks like you're revelling in abusive masculine hedonism, and then claiming irony as defense after the fact. That said, it's a very well written story, the TF is beautifully described, and all the fetishes tick my boxes. But this does read as an alt-right gay police fantasy without any critique or criticism offered against it. That doesn't have to bother you as an author, but it's understandable why it would bother some readers. This comment probably seems harsh, but my message is really this--I think you, as an author, are obviously skilled enough that you could handle these political themes with more complexity and nuance than you did here. That's the story I want to read from you.
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
3/8/17, 6:18 PM
Loved it......;-)
3/8/17, 6:09 PM
Still working on it, friends! Just working a ton...and now I'm in Chicago getting a NEW job and just signed a lease for an apartment. So I'm moving to Chicago and planning out my new life. Chapter 10 is VERY much being worked on. I just tend to work slowly...lol. It's coming though! Not giving up on this story!