Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/8/17, 8:24 PM
Interesting, but there were almost no details on his change and "conversion" process. and did his appearance change at all ? details are important!
M
3/8/17, 8:03 PM
Another Great story! Keep on writing dude and do you mind giving me address for the gym?? ;@)
Wesley Bracken
3/8/17, 7:22 PM
No story is apolitical. Sex is politics. It isn't something you can opt out of. Questions of dominance and power, questions of what it means to be masculine and what kinds of masculinity we should and do value are all worthwhile issues that stories like this should address. My issue with this story is that it doesn't bother staking any sort of nuanced or thoughtful claim about any of that--you can argue that this story is a critique of this sort of masculine power, but I don't see any sort of critical eye being directed at the content here. If anything, it looks like you're revelling in abusive masculine hedonism, and then claiming irony as defense after the fact. That said, it's a very well written story, the TF is beautifully described, and all the fetishes tick my boxes. But this does read as an alt-right gay police fantasy without any critique or criticism offered against it. That doesn't have to bother you as an author, but it's understandable why it would bother some readers. This comment probably seems harsh, but my message is really this--I think you, as an author, are obviously skilled enough that you could handle these political themes with more complexity and nuance than you did here. That's the story I want to read from you.
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
3/8/17, 6:18 PM
Loved it......;-)
3/8/17, 6:09 PM
Still working on it, friends! Just working a ton...and now I'm in Chicago getting a NEW job and just signed a lease for an apartment. So I'm moving to Chicago and planning out my new life. Chapter 10 is VERY much being worked on. I just tend to work slowly...lol. It's coming though! Not giving up on this story!
Anonymous
3/8/17, 4:04 PM
Interesting!
Anonymous
3/8/17, 3:55 PM
Excellent work!!
Anonymous
3/8/17, 3:53 PM
This was a great read!!
fan
3/8/17, 1:24 PM
in any case, I happen to like your stories a lot. I hope you could write more imperatenor! :D keep it up!
fan
3/8/17, 1:21 PM
the poster was right about saying that no one was arguing about tfs to fembois. Poster was right and I admit I made a mistake there, but I'm just a little miffed that here comes a plot that's so different from the usual 'muscle to femboi revenge of the oppressed nerd and/or fatso' in the site and the author doesn't get the appreciation he deserves. If I don't like the story, I wouldn't leave a scathing comment. Constructive criticisms are fine but when it's just thoughtless and mean, I don't like. Maybe I'm just expecting too much maturity from my fellow patrons on the site... P.S. I'm that oppressed nerdy fatso so I'm not being mean to authors who write those stuff. Some stories of that trope are actually very good but I think the site's becoming supersaturated with those types of stories.