Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/8/17, 7:15 AM
The controversial stories are the best. Just go look at xOrrinx.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 6:14 AM
I for one am glad to see a "masculinization" story. Nothing wrong with femboi TFs but they're not my thing.
3/8/17, 5:12 AM
@TimNJ, I understand the difficulty of being apolitical in these times, especially if you live in the US. I do however think it's important to be able to prevent our political ideals from tainting our enjoyment of a particular work. I'm very politically opinionated myself, and I think it's one of the reasons I ended up writing the story the way I did. Darren's happy with his new self, yes, but he's happy only because he's lost his sense of empathy, his ability to understand, to care about other people. He's powerful, yes, but that power comes at a cost of his very humanity. What does that say about the dynamics of power in our own world? You tell me. I'm very happy you enjoyed and I hope my future stories meet your expectations. I'm also glad we had this discussion - I'm always looking for ways to develop my writing, and understanding your point of view has given me some ideas to implement in my future writing. imp.
3/8/17, 4:57 AM
@BlindSeer, very eloquently explained. I find myself agreeing that it's better for a work to be controversial than bland. Thank you for the critique, it really does mean a lot. @fan, the recent surge of femboi transformations is one of the factors that motivated me to write this story. I write the content I myself want to read. Very glad you enjoyed. To everyone else, thank you for the discussion, the criticism, and the kind words. imp.
TimNJ
3/8/17, 4:53 AM
Ugh I hit send too fast, here's my corrected 2nd paragraph's sentence: As an aside I find it impossible to be apolitical these days, but again I thank you for your response.
TimNJ
3/8/17, 4:50 AM
Hey Imperatenor - thank you for your response, which I do appreciate - you are a talented writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories. My perception upon first reading was that liberal ideas were disregarded and dropped, making the chief more homophobic than "hot" IMO. I thought you were inserting an alt-right agenda at the expense of my main concern, which is to enhance my masturbation, lol. All that being said, I would not mind seeing the deputy become corrupted, that's always hot. As an aside I find it impossible to be am guilty of being apolitical these days, but again I thank you for your response. I should reiterate you were very cool to respond as you did, and you have one over on CNN commentator Salena Zito, who I just saw tonight blocked me on Twitter based on one opinionated tweet I sent her a few weeks ago!
Anonymous
3/8/17, 4:48 AM
Re. fan, no one was arguing for transformation into fembois. The description of the transformation was great. I suppose the aggressive/denigrating humiliation is just not my style, even if he was oblivious ( to the fact that he was acting just like Byrnes). Good discussion.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 3:54 AM
The muscle growth and mental changes were very well described. The foreshadowing from the prior chief, "when it feels right..." added to the tension. The corruption and domination of power were well described. Not fun, but believable. Well done.
BlindSeer
3/8/17, 12:45 AM
Interesting story. About what i expected based on the tags. The transformation involving the badge and progressing with the cigar was a nice touch. I'm a huge fan of muscle growth and masculinization, and this story did not disappoint. The way you descrbed the transformation was vivid, easy to follow, easy to image, and paced really well. The fact that neither character was aware while reality changed and the clothes readjusted themselves was done well. If i had to critique something, it would be that reality didn't change enough. Turner still considered him the same person, so when Darren shouted him down and sexually assualted him it had more of a negative impact because of their friendship, even if i knew it was coming. As for some of the negative reactions, i imagine its because of the real world happenings with the police, violence and homophobia. The attitude of Bryce, and the belief from the new Darren that only faggots get fucked, and real men doing the fucking feels very real to some people, especially after this last year and power shifts around the world. Fantasy is easy for people to go along with, its the real world aspects that you have to be careful about. This isn't to say that you shouldn't write what you want. You should, especially since you tagged it fine. Your kink is not everyone else's kink and thats ok. I just hope this explains where some of the displeasure might be coming from. Even though i didn't enjoy every aspect of the fic, i thought the premise was clever, the transformation superbly described, and the story was well written. Keep up the good work, and remember, its better for people to feel passionately, either loving or hating it, then for everyone to only "like" it. Keep up the good work, and i look forward to reading your future works.
Anonymous
3/7/17, 11:51 PM
Keep this shut going. Very hot, has my muscle dick leaking!