Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/8/17, 8:15 AM
¡Ja, ja! ¡se pone mejor! gracias por actualizarlo tan pronto.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 7:18 AM
I too am glad to see a good masculinization story. There has been a drout of these stories on almost every where I look recently.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 7:15 AM
The controversial stories are the best. Just go look at xOrrinx.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 6:14 AM
I for one am glad to see a "masculinization" story. Nothing wrong with femboi TFs but they're not my thing.
3/8/17, 5:12 AM
@TimNJ, I understand the difficulty of being apolitical in these times, especially if you live in the US. I do however think it's important to be able to prevent our political ideals from tainting our enjoyment of a particular work. I'm very politically opinionated myself, and I think it's one of the reasons I ended up writing the story the way I did. Darren's happy with his new self, yes, but he's happy only because he's lost his sense of empathy, his ability to understand, to care about other people. He's powerful, yes, but that power comes at a cost of his very humanity. What does that say about the dynamics of power in our own world? You tell me. I'm very happy you enjoyed and I hope my future stories meet your expectations. I'm also glad we had this discussion - I'm always looking for ways to develop my writing, and understanding your point of view has given me some ideas to implement in my future writing. imp.
3/8/17, 4:57 AM
@BlindSeer, very eloquently explained. I find myself agreeing that it's better for a work to be controversial than bland. Thank you for the critique, it really does mean a lot. @fan, the recent surge of femboi transformations is one of the factors that motivated me to write this story. I write the content I myself want to read. Very glad you enjoyed. To everyone else, thank you for the discussion, the criticism, and the kind words. imp.
TimNJ
3/8/17, 4:53 AM
Ugh I hit send too fast, here's my corrected 2nd paragraph's sentence: As an aside I find it impossible to be apolitical these days, but again I thank you for your response.
TimNJ
3/8/17, 4:50 AM
Hey Imperatenor - thank you for your response, which I do appreciate - you are a talented writer and I look forward to reading more of your stories. My perception upon first reading was that liberal ideas were disregarded and dropped, making the chief more homophobic than "hot" IMO. I thought you were inserting an alt-right agenda at the expense of my main concern, which is to enhance my masturbation, lol. All that being said, I would not mind seeing the deputy become corrupted, that's always hot. As an aside I find it impossible to be am guilty of being apolitical these days, but again I thank you for your response. I should reiterate you were very cool to respond as you did, and you have one over on CNN commentator Salena Zito, who I just saw tonight blocked me on Twitter based on one opinionated tweet I sent her a few weeks ago!
Anonymous
3/8/17, 4:48 AM
Re. fan, no one was arguing for transformation into fembois. The description of the transformation was great. I suppose the aggressive/denigrating humiliation is just not my style, even if he was oblivious ( to the fact that he was acting just like Byrnes). Good discussion.
Anonymous
3/8/17, 3:54 AM
The muscle growth and mental changes were very well described. The foreshadowing from the prior chief, "when it feels right..." added to the tension. The corruption and domination of power were well described. Not fun, but believable. Well done.