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UchihaDEMS
3/7/17, 9:09 PM
Espero que a la proxima el hijo le de al padre <3
Anonymous
3/7/17, 9:01 PM
good one
Anonymous
3/7/17, 7:01 PM
One of the few stories I didn't skim through!!! Very hot!!!
Anonymous
3/7/17, 6:41 PM
I thought the story was hot as hell and had no confusion about personal motives. Not all people write with themes that reflect their world views. We read the stories on this site to get off, and that's it.
Anonymous
3/7/17, 6:39 PM
What a great story man! Congratulations! Would love to read more of this kind of stories, with forced submission. Not to mention the transformation of the chief was great! The mental changes subtle, and the physical changes perfectly described. Definitely one of the best stories I've found on this site. Please continue with this kind of writing, I'm begging you
3/7/17, 6:34 PM
@TimNJ, I'm sorry it didn't match your expectations. You can also rest assured that any neoconservative or alt right views you perceive from this story do not reflect my personal opinions. I do admit I'm a little confused - this is a forced, unwilling transformation which culminates in humiliating, violent, and borderline non-consensual sex. In what way does this story give the impression that Darren's changes and behavior are something we should aspire towards? I write for myself first and foremost rather than for other people, and something that really turns me on is the theme of corruption. Morals, higher reasoning, and personality overwritten by base aggression and lust. I thought it would be hot to have Darren, a Deputy trying his best to do the right thing and fix the system, become as corrupted as Byrnes before him. Personally I really enjoyed writing this story since it's something I've never attempted before, but I completely understand if you don't feel the same way. Thanks for the feedback, imp.
Amalianetwork
3/7/17, 5:57 PM
Neo-conservative, alt-right fantasy? Really? Dude he basically made a gay version of the original guy. He was dominant and made hints that he had sex with the people he promoted. So some liberal ideas were left behind in the process, so what? This is porn not politics.
Anonymous
3/7/17, 4:03 PM
Holy shit that was some ride!
TimNJ
3/7/17, 3:30 PM
I read the tags as well but I never thought they would be subverted into some neo-conservative, alt-right police fantasy. Now I know, so I'll give a more focused review of your stories i move forward with them.
Mar 5, 2017
Castor the Twin
3/7/17, 2:56 PM
Hey, thanks for the feedback! Glad to know people enjoy it. I'll work on a second part soon, but inspiration can be fickle. We'll see if life gets in the way as well.