Recent Comments

4/2/25, 4:43 PM
Why do I get the feeling there was a section between part one and part two that didn’t get posted?

4/2/25, 4:48 PM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) I agree. Well-written story, though! Looking forward to what happens next (and what happened prior to this section)!

BBC admirer
6/24/25, 10:54 AM
@[Kyle Cicero](/user/show/10023983) Why did they leave some pubic hair

6/24/25, 11:34 AM
@BBC admirer Since I’m not the author, I can’t help you on that score.
6/24/25, 11:16 AM
More Please!
1/28/25, 11:54 PM
It was my fault that I didn't notice the #piss warning in the list of stories...but yuck! That will always take me right out of the story. How bored do you have to get to think piss is somehow sexy?

Anonymous
6/24/25, 7:46 AM
@[bpnghty](/user/show/10002665) Some find it exciting (I do!), it's just part of the fantasy. Remember it's related to BDSM ... Anyway I like that story, a lot!

6/24/25, 10:01 AM
@[bpnghty](/user/show/10002665) There are whole websites dedicated to piss play (and worse, btw). There is no accounting for kinks and preferences. We don't do kink-shaming on this site!
6/24/25, 9:04 AM
Hot story so far!
Jun 21, 2025
Anonymous
6/24/25, 8:45 AM
Kinda boring actually. All the good parts (the moment of change and mind manipulation) are kinda glossed over. It feels rushed, and ironically seems to have no focus, as if the events arent actually happening. This story should've spent some more time in the drafts, because it's an alright premise, with a dissapointing execution.
Drifting Scot
6/24/25, 8:36 AM
Beautifuly written. Very hot...looking forward to next part!
6/24/25, 7:40 AM
I remembered this story again the other day; I still love it! Really hoping for a continuation sometime!
6/24/25, 6:31 AM
Would be awsome if he had gained a dad bod from all the drinking but his dumb swager make him think he was model esk
6/24/25, 6:11 AM
Let the fun begin! 😈 Also, I have a small feeling Jake is also a faggot for sure. You should taken coach up on his offer. He would have made him your bitch. In time we will tell who are the fags on the team. 😏