Recent Comments

baralai88@gmail.com
3/2/17, 5:52 AM
Great story! Please keep writing.
Anonymous
3/2/17, 4:40 AM
Such a hot transformation! Hope you finish Jungle Nursery soon too!
Dat Spicy Ramen
3/2/17, 4:22 AM
Am traveling for work at the moment. Will get back to writing when I get back! :)
Anonymous
3/2/17, 3:36 AM
Hot!!! Keep going!! Write the next chapter!! I wanna see what happens next!
Anonymous
3/2/17, 12:48 AM
*Liked
Anonymous
3/2/17, 12:48 AM
what happend to Bob? I like him
Anonymous
3/2/17, 12:11 AM
Freaky is right and oh so erotic.
HypPup
3/1/17, 10:27 PM
Yes I forgot! An amazing story. I loved it enjoyed is so much.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 10:05 PM
The parts of the story I understood were very good. You clearly have some hot ideas. However the story itself was very confusing. It is often unclear where character are, or who's doing what when in the story.
bleuboy
3/1/17, 7:57 PM
Grammar and punctuation, it's a thing. What I would assume is a hot story is ruined by the horrid pacing because of the lack of punctuation.