Recent Comments

bleuboy
3/1/17, 7:57 PM
Grammar and punctuation, it's a thing. What I would assume is a hot story is ruined by the horrid pacing because of the lack of punctuation.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:50 PM
what would happen if two people with this ability targeted each other?
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
3/1/17, 6:45 PM
I also disargree with Hypnothrill...........there are a bunch of part Stories that never had an ending..........so just go on posting your stories as you wish ;-)) ang really got writing ......enjoyed it a lot
biguynj
3/1/17, 4:05 PM
Excellent story lost it with the "I have to pay the bills " any chance a friend can go liking for Timothy at vixens run and end up like him
TimNJ
3/1/17, 2:41 PM
Reading this was the equivalent of driving 80 miles per hour on a busy street. Or 128 kilometers per hour.
Lenny
3/1/17, 2:13 PM
Freaky. Gave me an erection. Whats going to happen next?
HypPup
3/1/17, 1:30 PM
I disagree with Hypnothrill. I don't mind the long read. I would rather the whole story then sections. I like when a story has an ending. To many times a writer will put things in sections and then things happen and readers never get an ending. Or the story starts to fall apart because the writers ideas keep coming and they all end up in the one story, as opposed to fully fleshed out ones.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 12:50 PM
Great story! Small suggestion: offer more details on what the escort program was (off ship) and what that would entail in terms of location, how he would be advertised etc.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:56 AM
more please
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:32 AM
hey, if you want to read more from this author he has another series called Aquata Cove. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/aquata-cove/