Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/2/17, 12:48 AM
*Liked
Anonymous
3/2/17, 12:48 AM
what happend to Bob? I like him
Anonymous
3/2/17, 12:11 AM
Freaky is right and oh so erotic.
HypPup
3/1/17, 10:27 PM
Yes I forgot! An amazing story. I loved it enjoyed is so much.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 10:05 PM
The parts of the story I understood were very good. You clearly have some hot ideas. However the story itself was very confusing. It is often unclear where character are, or who's doing what when in the story.
bleuboy
3/1/17, 7:57 PM
Grammar and punctuation, it's a thing. What I would assume is a hot story is ruined by the horrid pacing because of the lack of punctuation.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:50 PM
what would happen if two people with this ability targeted each other?
AeonFlux@hotmail.de
3/1/17, 6:45 PM
I also disargree with Hypnothrill...........there are a bunch of part Stories that never had an ending..........so just go on posting your stories as you wish ;-)) ang really got writing ......enjoyed it a lot
biguynj
3/1/17, 4:05 PM
Excellent story lost it with the "I have to pay the bills " any chance a friend can go liking for Timothy at vixens run and end up like him
TimNJ
3/1/17, 2:41 PM
Reading this was the equivalent of driving 80 miles per hour on a busy street. Or 128 kilometers per hour.