Recent Comments

Anonymous
3/1/17, 12:50 PM
Great story! Small suggestion: offer more details on what the escort program was (off ship) and what that would entail in terms of location, how he would be advertised etc.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:56 AM
more please
Anonymous
3/1/17, 7:32 AM
hey, if you want to read more from this author he has another series called Aquata Cove. https://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/sf-fantasy/aquata-cove/
Anonymous
3/1/17, 5:22 AM
I'm intrigued.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 5:16 AM
Hypnothrill's comment is worth considering. He's an established writer on this site. Many of the other writers also use the episodic format to build excitment for the story. Long reads get tedious. Having said that -- great story. So hot. Damn!!!
Cutlerfan
3/1/17, 4:59 AM
Great story! I wonder how Dave's life turned out? No doubt another man whore.
hypnothrill@yahoo.com
3/1/17, 3:58 AM
I agree--another fantastic story! I loved the slow mental transformation. One suggestion: since you're writing such long stories, you might consider posting them in multiple installments. Readers like the anticipation of waiting for another section and imagining what will happen next to the men in the story...it gets them all hot and bothered.
Anonymous
3/1/17, 3:51 AM
very hot and a nice build up, just wish there was more hypnosis or mind control aspects
Anonymous
3/1/17, 3:02 AM
That was super hot. Kind of wish there had been some follow up for AJ, Dave, and Peter for how they ended up. But super hot nonetheless.
bimarguynj
3/1/17, 1:56 AM
I am really liking this. Has many possibilities. Keep up the good writing